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02-17-2017, 12:05 AM | #1 |
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i used to do some ghost writing way back in the day for side cash. a friend and i were board last week at work because its slow so we got to talking movies.
we agreed the wolverine origins movie was good except for the ending and started plotting how it would have been better, then started thinking about how it would be nice to have some gi joe origins movies since now all the movies will be in that stupid joint universe. so i was challenged to do a snake eyes the origin screen play. well work was slow but it wasnt that slow lol so i did a treatment instead and just outlined it in a way. i got my big picture on paper with the details to be done in a screen play. i rarely go back and proof read my work and shoot from the hip. i just let the story progress as it comes to me. i prefer to write by hand on paper as you see here, and i dont give a crap about spelling errors or grammar. i do apologize for the sloppy hand writing though. my brain goes faster then my fingers. 2 ink pens and 3/4 of a new tablet later this is what i came up with: https://www.facebook.com/32857689400...type=3&theater any and all comments are welcome. thanks |
03-24-2017, 07:00 AM | #2 |
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anyone bothered to read this? just wondering
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03-24-2017, 11:20 AM | #3 |
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I mean no offence it might be awesome but
2 ink pens and 3/4 of a note pad worth of hand written fanfic
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03-24-2017, 01:54 PM | #4 |
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Just started. But hurting my eyes a lil
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03-24-2017, 03:25 PM | #5 |
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i rarely go back and proof read my work and shoot from the hip. i just let the story progress as it comes to me. i prefer to write by hand on paper as you see here, and i dont give a crap about spelling errors or grammar. i do apologize for the sloppy hand writing though. my brain goes faster then my fingers. 2 ink pens and 3/4 of a new tablet later this is what i came up with: https://www.facebook.com/32857689400...type=3&theater any and all comments are welcome. thanks I mean rough drafts are cool I love BTS stuff and all but before presenting someone something...it should be professional. Brings to mind the Buzz Dixon Kindle Worlds book. I was disappointed in the amount of errors, especially from a seasoned pro.
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03-24-2017, 10:49 PM | #6 |
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no offence taken but if you want to re-type it can i have a copy. i ask if anyone read it because it had a lot of views and no comments. if people liked it i would rewrite in my spare time. i deploy soon and would have the time then. if people dont like it then i'm not wasting my time.
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03-24-2017, 10:53 PM | #7 |
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my hand writing sucks and im not much for spell checking, that i apologize for. i dont hand write much things anymore, work has revolved around a pc for over 20 years and my hand writing has suffered.
this was never intended to be shared to the public just some friends who asked for it. wanted to type it out but my time is short and spent on other stuff for now thanks for torturing your eyes though lol jk Last edited by Voice of Reason; 03-24-2017 at 11:03 PM.. |
03-24-2017, 11:02 PM | #8 |
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03-25-2017, 12:06 AM | #9 |
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Ah I see, when you said you were a ghost writer it gave me a different impression.
George Lucas wrote Star Wars in a similar fashion except he used pencil on yellow notepaper. I place high expectations on a lot of things...just the way I roll. No offense meant.
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06-07-2018, 09:25 PM | #10 |
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i've had requests to clean up and type up my snake eyes movie outline so here it is
https://www.facebook.com/pg/Mach-5-C...01315276728748 scroll down to the bottom for the new stuff |
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