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07-11-2020, 01:14 AM | #1 |
Cobra Soldier
Join Date: Jul 2020
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COBRA! is returning sooner than not soon! Episodes 1-3 have been re-edited and are almost funny this time! The PSA's have also returned, with a brand new one already released!
Here is the brand new super mega awesome supreme theme song and intro video for the COBRA! series: |
07-11-2020, 01:15 AM | #2 |
Cobra Soldier
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Location: Nowhere, Oklahoma
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Here is the first new PSA, starring Wild Bill. This is actually an episodic PSA where Wild Bill, a boomer, tries to relate to the younger generation, but fails every time.
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07-11-2020, 01:37 AM | #3 |
Mass Nerderer
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Location: Slitherin' around the tank- It's cool, though, 'cause I'm being "watched"
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Nope. I remember you. Still not funny, but it is better without the race jokes.
Alts are against site rules, by the way. |
07-11-2020, 01:43 AM | #4 |
Cobra Soldier
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Didn't ask and I don't care. Thanks anyway!
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07-11-2020, 01:47 AM | #5 |
Mass Nerderer
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07-11-2020, 02:10 AM | #6 |
Iron Grenadier
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Location: Pennsylvania
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As a writer, and even just as a human, this could have used a redraft. Or forty.
Maybe just take the concept back to the drawing board. |
07-11-2020, 02:13 AM | #7 |
Mass Nerderer
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Quote:
I'm typically very supportive of art, no matter the skill level, especially new guys. But this one... |
07-11-2020, 02:17 AM | #8 |
Iron Grenadier
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Location: Pennsylvania
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Oh I know, I think I was either lurking and watching it go down or not posting much at the time. I was going for kinda tongue-in-cheek lol
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07-11-2020, 06:05 AM | #9 |
The Man You Know & Love
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What the fuck is this shit??? To the OP...either you're a troll and this is a troll account or maybe you were banned at one time, or ten times, and this is just another alternate account or you just have poor taste and don't think before you post.
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07-11-2020, 06:38 AM | #10 |
Crimson Guard
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Richmond, VA
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I can see what you're going for, and I like the idea. I don't like the execution. I'm not going to critique your writing but I would recommend reading something *about* writing. Or at least listening to an interview with someone like Dan Harmon where he talks about the writing process. If you want to read something I'd recommend Stephen King's "On Writing" which is half autobiography and half instructional (and is only about 300 pages)
That said, you definitely need to work on your sound editing. At the bare minimum, the volume should match across the whole video. In the Cobra song the explosion at the end is about 2x as loud as the song. In the "PSA" the voices are so quiet you can barely hear them and when I turn it up by the end the fart sound effects are even lower than the voices were! The video editing was spot on though, friend. |
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