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01-02-2010, 11:30 PM | #1 |
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this is a thread to express anything joe or cobra in simple, funny terms. the process is simple. the first line is 5 syllables, the second is 7, and the third 5. keep in mind, syllables, not words. come on tankers, speak your mind in simple, but poignant verse. you'll find it much rewarding. all emotions and opinions can be summed up in 3 simple lines. i've made 3 terrible haikus for an example:
SNAKE EYES IN BLACK MASK HASBRO MAKES WAY TOO DAMN MANY I NO LONGER BUY HASBRO PLEASE MAKE W.O.R.M.S. THOUGH I HAVE MADE HIM MYSELF IT IS TIME ALREADY CHILE PLEASE NO MORE DUKE IF I SEE ONE MORE OF THOSE DAMN I'LL STAB MY EYE ok, there you go, anyone else game? if no one else is, that's fine, there are more where these came from. here's a helpful hint... http://www.eliteskills.com/poetry/Haiku.php Last edited by A.V.A.C.; 01-02-2010 at 11:42 PM.. |
01-02-2010, 11:35 PM | #2 |
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qft!!!!
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01-02-2010, 11:36 PM | #3 |
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G.I. Joe is cool
I play with them at the school Man, I am a tool I wanted to do this so badly, but I can't think of shit haha. Oh well that will have to do. |
01-02-2010, 11:39 PM | #4 |
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Roc is kinda lame
at least we get some new toys hopefully better.
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01-02-2010, 11:40 PM | #5 |
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good cr, lol, but rhyming isn't necessary, in fact try to avoid if possible.
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01-02-2010, 11:43 PM | #6 |
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here's another:
COBRA HURRICANE IT'S FAST ITS BLUE AND YELLOW NIGHT RAVEN YOUR NOT |
01-02-2010, 11:49 PM | #7 |
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I play with my Joes
all day even with my girl then we get naked.
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01-03-2010, 12:02 AM | #8 |
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easy now, don't get dirty. good narrative though.
here's one, TOMAX AND XAMONT PRETTY BOYS IN PRETTY CLOTHES COBRA'S PRETTY PRIDE |
01-03-2010, 12:18 AM | #9 |
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Customizing's Fun
But Hasbro Get Off Your Ass Give Us More Vintage
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01-03-2010, 12:21 AM | #10 |
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well put blay, well put.
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