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10-29-2010, 02:28 PM | #1 |
DOUBLE "O" COMMANDO
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: AMERICA
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After introducing different characters to my "Joeverse", I decided to attempt to put some structure to my world. The premise is that the world water supply has been contaminated & we pick it up from there:
From the encrypted journal of Gen. J. Colton: It began on New Year's day at 12:00 midnight,2020. The world's water supply was attacked all at the same time by different terrorist organizations working in unison. What was put into the water supply was a bio- synthetic agent that causes the body to dehydrate - the more you drink the less your body retains. This would cause total irreversible kidney & body breakdown.Hundred of thousand across the globe died , while millions were infected. The only non - contaminated water was bottled water & that quickly started to disappear. Governments declared martial law & seized all of the soft drink industries water supplies, as well as any equipment used for water filtering. 2 months into martial law, an antidote was created though the efforts of the African nation of Wakanda & a little know European industrial company located in northern Europe. The country that this company in located in is called Snaca, it is a very isolated country run by a very eccentric dictator know as Arboca. The country borders are heavily guarded & no one is allowed in without proper documents & you can only leave .... well they say no one leaves alive anyway. The rumors are they developed the synthetic agent that was used in the terrorist attacks on the world. Anyone thought to be able prove this theory ,has disappeared or turned up dead.What is know but to only a select few is that only one true terrorist organization running the whole thing & that group's name is COBRA! Next-the reinstatement of G.I.JOE! October 2020 - 10 months after attack on world's water supply: Midnight on a cold pre-winter Chicago morning / night, a steel black limo pull up to a seemingly vacant warehouse on the city's northwest side. 4 men ( heavily armed ) get out of both sides of the limo, only after they are sure that the area is secure does a well dressed lady emerge from the car. As she get out, a side door of the warehouse opens & a bespectacled young man walks out, he speaks: Young man : Madam President, it is truly an honor.The person you seek is located in the back of the warehouse. As the President enters the warehouse & proceeds to the back , a wall opens up to reveal a hidden communication center with monitors accessing pictures from across the world. A bearded man is standing in front of one of the monitors which has a view of the limo outside. Madam President: I see you still keep up with the business of the world. Bearded man : I never stopped , only the government stopped, not me. If you had not shut us down, maybe we would have been able to stop this disaster from happening. Madam President : Hindsight is always perfect vision.The reason I am here now is to reinstate the program not just nationally, but globally.I need you to make contact with all the other organizations leaders & setup a summit to determine how to move forward immediately. Bearded man : Why would I do that? Just to be shut down again by the bureaucrats when they think we are not needed or relevant again. Madam President ( angrily) :The only person you answer to is me!The only person that can shut you down is me! Now, you have 24 hours to decide if you are going to take the job or stand here in your "little" warehouse & whine about what woulda,coulda been, Gen. Colton. After a long pause, Colton finally turns around looks at the President & smiles. Colton: When did you get so tough, Wendy? Madam President (smiles): Now, you have 23 hours & 55 min. & the clock is ticking. As the President turns to leave, Colton turns to the bespectacled young man. Colton: Four eyes, execute protocol 2022. At that point, Four eyes walks over to the main board & hits a switch & simply says two words : "It's On" Minutes later, outside as the President's limo puts away, a figure emerges from the shadows & simply says two words : "It's On"............. December 2020 The country of Snaca normally does not open it's boarders to the outside world except during one season, the Christmas / New Year's celebration season. The country is know world round for the most beautiful decorations & presentations of the holiday spirit. It has been rumored the ruler of Snaca as a child, never had a chance to celebrate the holidays & that's why he does so with such flair now. So you'll find pictures everywhere of the ruler, Arboc waving & smiling to crowds & telling the world "how great it is to live here". But, if you look just to the right of the dictator in any picture you see of him, you will see a very menacing armored man trying not to be noticed. This is Nitka aka Mortar: the ruler's personal bodyguard & also his chief scientist. It was he who discovered the cure for the bio tech disease that plagued the world earlier this year.What is not well known is that he created the disease & that it cost him most of his body. His body now is a total defense system & is capable of taking out a small army. What is only know to a select few is that the armor that he wears also helps keep him alive. Approximately 400km east of the main celebration, at the pharmaceutical plant where the cure was first discovered deep in bowels of the plant is a section off limits to regular personell called "PH1". You can only enter if your DNA matches what 's on file. If it does not match, you are taken out with"extreme prejudice" on the spot. A tall aristocratic - looking woman is standing in the middle of a bank of high technical equipment that is being monitored by armed technicians seemingly speaking into the air. Lady: Are you certain this information is accurate? Voice: Countessa,I am certain that if it is not, I won't be alive to tell you I was wrong. Countessa: Yes,now continue with the plans of the Americans & what they seek to do. Voice: On Dec 31 at midnight, the Americans are planning a convergence of all the leaders of "tradecraft" in order to consolidate them all under one umbrella organization that shares assets as well as information. Britain,Spain,Africa are among the countries that will be sending representatives. Countessa: Where is this meeting of the minds taking place and how can we make sure that this is the first and the last meeting of this kind. Voice: The place is the new Twin Towers in New York for symbolic reasons and we know how Americans love their symbolism. Plans are being put into motion to make sure that the only thing left standing after the meeting will be the Towers. Countessa: There is no room for failure in this. No one should be left alive to tell the tale. Voice: It shall be so. Out. As the Voice sounds off, the Countessa walks over to a single monitor... and hits a switch and another voice comes on and says yes. Countessa: I'm sending you the coordinates and the logistics that no one should leave alive. Voice: Does this include your operatives as well? Countessa: Especially my operatives. They are getting cocky... and cocky makes people sloppy, and that attitude will not be tolerated!! Voice: It will be done and I will send you a gift of their heads! Countessa: Do not disappoint me Rapid Fire. Rapid Fire: Have I ever my love. Out As the transmission ends, a third party who was listening also cuts his transmission... and quietly says to himself, we'll be waiting. Four eyes then gets up and then proceeds to hit a button and the room comes to life.... This is a story I started a few months ago, but I don't think I posted it here. Let me know what you guys / gals think. |
10-29-2010, 03:30 PM | #2 |
The True Commander
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Sounds good , hope to read more
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11-05-2010, 10:36 PM | #3 |
Cobra Soldier
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: New Zealand
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Not bad, but perhaps there could be spaces between paragraphs and dialogue so it's easier to read.
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11-09-2010, 01:41 PM | #4 |
Rampage Nephew
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Location: A world without guns
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This is awesome !!! can't wait to see the characters .
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11-09-2010, 08:56 PM | #5 |
DOUBLE "O" COMMANDO
Join Date: Jun 2008
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Thanks guys for reading. I actually changed a line before I copied it which caused the grammatical errors. ChevyMel, Somewhere on the 'tank there are pictures of my charactors. I plan to take more as well as continue the story.
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