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06-27-2020, 01:32 PM | #1 |
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My first shot at writing any type of story since grade school. All feedback is welcomed.
My vision of the GI Joe universe from the begining. All characters come from cartoon, comic & movies. Some have been changed, most have not. Last edited by Derex61977; 06-27-2020 at 03:51 PM.. |
06-27-2020, 01:35 PM | #2 |
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CH. 1
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- DATE:24SEPT2016 TIME:0946 ZULU LOCATION: DUGWAY UTAH DUGWAY PROVING GROUND -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "We'll be at the gate here soon Colonel. I'm going to ask one more time before we have this meeting, are you going to be able to control yourself?" LT. Colonel Lane turned his upper torso around in his passenger seat to look at General Flagg directly in his eye as he was sipping on his glass of Scotch. "For the 11th time since we landed here…...I got you" with a wink of the eye. "I just know the history between the two of you and I want to get thru this with out issue." General Flagg responded blowing out a cloud of smoke from his mouth. "Besides. I out rank him now". "I'm serious David" Flagg said sternly. The limousine tinted all black Bentley pulled up to the gate "Welcome to the Army Test and Evaluation Command Dugway Proving Ground" came from the gate guard. "I will need your retinal scan, right index finder and for you to repeat the phrase on the sign." Identification confirmed. Sargent Nicholas Evans. Came across the screen. Identification confirmed. LT. Colonel David Lane. Identification confirmed. General Lawrence Flagg. "May I ask the reason for your visit General?" "The General and I are here to meet with Major Rexford in the Biochemical Ordnance division" the Colonel stated. "Convoy escort 23" the guard said into the radio mic attached to his collar. "When you proceed thru the gates you will follow the Humvee mark 23. You will be followed by a similarly armed Humvee. You will stay behind the escort at all times. Any diviation from your course will result into automatic fire upon the vehicle you're in. Are you clear?" "Yes" replied Sargent Evens. "Proceed". A five minute drive and the vehicle procession arrived at the bio-chem division building 23. "I don't plan on being here more then 90 minutes Sargent. So if you're hungry you can head over to the mess. Just be back on time." "Yes sir". |
06-27-2020, 03:07 PM | #3 |
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Interesting.
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06-27-2020, 04:43 PM | #4 |
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Attention on deck rang out loudly as Flagg and Lane entered the room.
"As you were" Flagg ordered. "Good evening General" "Major Rexford is expecting me" Now sooner then he could finish what he was saying the Major walked out his office. "Glad you could make it General". "Well if this new weapon is as great as you described it will be well worth the trip". "Hillbilly Willie!!!" Lane yelled out. That was a term Major William Rexford Sr. Hadn't heard in over ten years and still angered him. Even brought back memories he'd soon forget for another ten. Rexford and Lane were cadet company classmates during their time at West Point. Lane was from an affluent background. Direct bloodline of Captain Raleigh Lane. One of the first members of the Roanoke settlers. Rexford came from a less then average upbringing in Springfield, Ohio. At age twelve he had lost both his father and mother and ended up moving to a small town in the northern end of the Appalachian Mountains with his grandparents. "Lane" he begrudgingly replied. "That's Lt. Colonel Lane". "My apologies Lt. Colonel". HAHAHAHA a boisterous laugh came from Lane. "You know I'm poking at you Willie. Glad to see you FINALLY made some rank". "Command of your own unit now. No longer just field commands". "Just trying to be like you David" said Rexford. "Unfortunately for you that can never happen for you Hillbilly". "Now that you long lost lovers have reacquainted yourselves, can we get to business" pressed General Flagg. "Follow me General". As Major Rexford led the way Flagg turned to Lane and gave him a look of disgust. "Whaattt" Lane said sheepishly. |
06-28-2020, 08:53 AM | #5 |
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"So what makes these weapons so special Willie"? Lane asked as all there men put on their containment suits.
. "As you see with the computer demo once we get inside, the warheads and missiles are proto type from M.A.R.S. pinpoint to within 2 meters, with a variable blast radius of 10 to 100 meters." " When filled with this new chemical compound my team developed not a trace of your target will remain". "Lt. Colonel if I can have a word with the General? Retinal bio's will gain you access." "Anything for you Major" "Just be careful. Wouldn't want you to get blown away". "Ha Ha". Lane responded. As the door closed behind Lane and he walked over to the ordnance table and display, Major Rexford turned to General Flagg. "Something I can help you with Major"? "Not one to question you motives General" Rexford began "But.." Flagg interupts "....but was it necessary to bring him along"? "If by him you mean the Lieutenant Colonel, he is apart of this special missionsunit I'm putting together." "Believe me I did take into consideration the past between the two of you, but this is too important for petty differences to holdup " "I understand General. Sorry for bringing it up" "No need to be sorry son. But next time underst…." Last edited by Derex61977; 06-28-2020 at 09:01 AM.. |
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