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06-11-2013, 05:27 PM | #11 |
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Just an update, I'm off to Africa tomorrow with work stuff, so won't be able to update this for a while I'm afraid.
Will get back to it ASAP! |
06-19-2013, 04:45 PM | #12 |
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Scene 1:
Swansworth and Joe are still making their way towards where they left their ship, although Joe feels he is being led away from where they should be going. He pushes the thought away and continues onward. All the while, a silent predator stalks them. They make their way through a low cave and stop in their tracks, A mechanoid in power armour is standing before them. Joe takes aim and the 3 remaining shots he has left PING loudly off the Kevlar plates. All he has left is the ancient Spastonite Sword, he bounds forward and makes to strike a powerful blow into the Cyborg Joe Is swatted aside effortlessly, Firefly 117 has his eyes on the target, he moves forward to crush Swansworth |
06-19-2013, 09:32 PM | #13 |
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cool start mate.love how you incorporate the Mcfarlane (?) Halo with joes. What body did you use for Prof X?Now get back to you camera and finish your story dammit
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06-29-2013, 11:56 AM | #14 |
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Any way, Scene 2 At the last minute, a sickening crunch is heard, Firefly teeters backwords and collapses, A thick wooden spear sticking out of his neck. Oil and blood mix and spurt out f the wound, until the Creature is still. Joe Crawls over to Swansworth "what.. what happened?" Swansworth senses a presence behind him, one that he hasn't felt in a very long time. KRAVEN: "SO, YOU HAVE RETURNED PALE ONE, MY FATHER OFTEN SAID YOU WOULD, I DID NOT BELIEVE HIM" Kraven's Father: Swansworth, Come, we must move, there is no time, more Pale ones will come, and swallow us all!" Joe, confused to no end, follows Swansworth closely as they make their way through the dense Jungle Joe "Sir, Who are they? how have they survived here?" Swansworth - "Son, they were here long before us. Come on we have to get to the camp" Joe - "...Camp? We are headed for our Ship? to get the discovery back to earth!" Swansworth - "I'm so sorry lad, you have been a great help to the cause" Joe Stairs in disbelief as Swansworth nods at Kraven Joe - "But, I.." Kraven slams his elbow into Joe's back, he crumples completely KRAVEN - "THIS ONE WAS WEAK, LETS GO" Swansworth - "No, pick him up, i has plans for this one" Kraven's Father "KRAVEN! DO AS INSTRUCTED! They move off, into the darkness. |
06-29-2013, 02:53 PM | #15 |
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Scene 3
Joe wakes up in a dark room, handcuffed, the air is thick and damp. Blood is caked on the walls and floor, the room smells like death. Why did Swansworth use me? he thinks Probarbly sold me out to Cobra the fucker, this is their kind of play pit. Blinding lights turn on as a door behind Joe Opens, well He'd soon see his captor, that famous chrome mask that he always wears! Joe - "YOU BASTARD! why am I here?! I helped you! I.. I don't understand.." Swansworth - "Joe, I'm sorry, I had to lie to you, I needed your help" Swansworth - Gazes of into the distance "I needed you, I had to use you, you would never have joined my cau.." Joe - "Of course I wouldn't have, you lying little sna-" Swansworth - " I did what I had to do, I'd be dead if it wasn't for you and your chumps, whose deaths I am most sorry for. I needed to get back to my troops, I had to get you and the others to follow somehow! I had nothing back on earth, nothing but time and my plans. Joe - leaps out of his chair "Those 'chumps' were my friends, and you led them to theirs DEATHS!" Swansworth - You'll see soon enough what their deaths were for, they were not in vain my boy! Take him away. |
06-29-2013, 03:34 PM | #16 |
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great work here .. the story, the pics .. a real work of art!
Count me as another who cannot wait to read more.
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06-30-2013, 02:37 PM | #17 |
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Hey thanks bro, means alot!
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07-19-2013, 08:30 AM | #18 |
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Scene 4
With Joe sleeping in the corner like a baby, Swansworth deliberates with his Generals. Swansworth - "So we need to spread out in this area, now I'm back, I'll be relinquishing control of our global forces from you Hawk. In fact, take yourself to Check point alpha, Falcon, Take your Steel brigade to Base Camp Charlie immediately. Rock, Stay here with me, I want you at my side at all times." Rock - "Yes sir, as you command" They move off out of the dark room. Joe is dragged over to Swansworth and revived with a harsh slap to the face. Swansworth - "Joe, I could have you killed right now, right here!" Joe - "..So do it.." Swansworth - "Allow me to finish. I won't kill you Joe, you are a good man, and I know you want to do good, which is why you came with me to this place. Join us Joe, you can't fight cobra on your own. You can't even get off this planet on your own!" Joe - "I.. You're right. What would you have me do?" Swansworth - "Good, I see great things in your future my boy. Your new kit is over there in the box. Meet me outside in 5 minutes." "Oh, and Welcome to the Joes!" |
07-19-2013, 10:34 AM | #19 |
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I'm digging this, keep up the great work!
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07-19-2013, 11:45 AM | #20 |
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Scene 5
Joe gets changed and heads out of the room, the roof appears to be made of rock and he can feel a strong breeze coming from the doorway when he opens it. Joe steps out onto a large Platau, with rockabove and below him, he is on a hidden cliff in a mountain. The Sun is setting slowly, throwing a sheer light through the huge mutated trees onto the ledge. Swansworth - "Welcome to Base Camp Whiskey Joe, We are well hidden here, only one road leads up here, and it is impossible to attack with more than one man at a time!" Rock - "Fall in with the other new boys punk, before you find my foot up your ass!" The Desert Ops Team snigger to themselves at the new guys getting the "Rock Treatment" Kraven glares at Rock, the only man who has ever beaten him in one on one combat. Swansworth - " FALL IN!" The newest Troopers pick up their gear and move into formation. Swansworth -"Ok lads, listen up. Joe and Duke, you are being assigned to the old Machine gun Nest over looking the Mountain pass. The only way in and out of this area. Understood? Good." "Captain Fenix, take the other two and scout the crash site where we touched down for resources." Swansworth - "Move OUT!" Cpt Fenix - "Ok boys, you heard the Commander." |
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