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05-26-2013, 10:34 AM | #1 |
Iron Grenadier
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So the World council has finally decided that Scientology is actually just an evil corporation, they have just got wind of a new MWF (Mind Washing Facility) in the woods near Copenhagen.
The leader David Miscavige is reported to be making his way through the forest on foot, following the old River. A crack team, lead by Roadblock has been selected to take out the leader nice and quickly in the forest, weakening the Corporation, with his mysterious disappearance. Scene one, "Heading up River" Part 2 coming soon! |
05-26-2013, 11:22 AM | #2 |
Crimson Guard
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sweet! totally awsome!
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05-26-2013, 06:28 PM | #3 |
Iron Grenadier
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Scene Two "Breaking Beach"
The Rib is steered to a perfect little beach that they can power into to get out and establish a rapid Beachhead. Part Three inbound soon! |
05-26-2013, 06:57 PM | #4 |
Iron Grenadier
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Scene 3 "Take the Shot"
Th rib is moored in a nearby lagoon after the quick drop. Two of the landing party, Law and Joe Trooper head off into the jungle to scout out the secret MWF. Mean while, Roadblock, Rust and Sure Fire head to the Cliffs, opposite to which the Leader was reported to be moving by land. Sure Fire lines up the shot, the Leader is in his sites.. Roadblock Yells "TAKE THE SHOT!" The Body guards open fire on the Team, Sure Fire is hit, stumbles back wards, Rust is torn to pieces by the AK &4. Roadblock moves fast. |
05-26-2013, 07:39 PM | #5 |
Iron Grenadier
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Scene 4 "Taking the Plunge"
Roadblock only has a few seconds to react, the automatic weapons are being trained on him. He Jumps, straight into the River, ignoring the rushiing rapids, It's his only way to escape.. Roadblock holds his breath, the water is murky, the henchmen can't see any bodies. Blood is flowing downriver from the corpse of Rust. They move on. The crew of the rib also now dispatched by the Scientologists, floats slowly downstream.. Roadblock climbs on board and heads off in pursuit, finding the limp body of Sure Fire, in the shallows he pulls him on board. There is a harsh dent in his bullet proof vest, he gets up and they head off together, they are all that remains of the Team, they must reach their goal. Scene 4 on its way! |
05-26-2013, 08:01 PM | #6 |
Iron Grenadier
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Scene 5 "Take the Hit"
Roadblock suddenly spots tracks leading up into the forest, he tells Sure Fire to wait with the rib till he returns. He Runs of into the Giant trees. In his suit, the Leader is Sweltering, the Mosquitoes near the river are eating him alive, He swears as he scuffs his expensive shoes, the sooner they get the the MWF the sooner he can harvest the money and leave. With a blood-curdling roar, a figure leaps over a fallen log and launches himself into the group.. With a loud, crunching *THUD*, Roadblock Tears into the Leader, leaving the Bodyguards unable to react! Roadblock drags the Leader down towards the ground, they tumble and fall, well away from the shots of the dismayed body guards. Roadblock lands on top of the Leader and his hands tighten around his throat, the life escaping him as he flails at his assailant. The body goes limp, the light flees from the Leaser's eyes. Roadblock gets up triumphantly. It's over, The Evil Corporation takes a savage blow. Guys, thanks for viewing my Dio story, it took two days to shoot, let me know if I can do things better/different for the next time I shoot something like this. E |
05-26-2013, 09:09 PM | #7 |
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Dude, I loved it! Very entertaining, nice work man......
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05-26-2013, 09:29 PM | #8 |
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Pretty good!!!
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05-27-2013, 08:29 AM | #9 |
Iron Grenadier
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Thanks guys, took alot of effort lol, but glad you liked em
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05-27-2013, 08:46 AM | #10 |
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Fun read! Those underwater pics turned out pretty good
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