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01-23-2012, 04:36 AM | #1 |
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This is my Rebel Angel fan fiction collection of customs. Each one has a story per link below.
http://www.hisstank.com/forum/g-i-jo...lance858a.html My Joeverse Summary - 200-300 years in the future, Cobra, a ancient secret society whose list of historic leaders/Cobra Commanders include Alexander the Great, Julius Caesar, Ghengis Khan, and Hitler, finally succeed in taking over the world through the massive use of nukes. Survivors of that nuclear holocaust find themselves cast into a future dark age under fuedal law with Cobra dominating every aspect of their lives. It's a high tech cyber punk industrial wasteland world. For those who choose not to live as a subject of Cobra, their only choice is to escape into the Badlands, vast areas of nearly uninhabitable wasteland, where they live as outlaws, bandits, pirates, and or freedom fighters. Create your own band of outlaws/freedom fighters/mercenaries/pirates or your own Cobra strike force for this world! You can even have your own Sector, name it Sector WHATEVER YOU WANT, or you can be a Cobra Noble with your own land to rule. Rule it however you want. Create fantastic background stories and post away! Choose your side and let the creative juices flow! More pics here: https://picasaweb.google.com/1041224...RebelAngelJinx
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Part 127 (continued): Chance
Storm Shadow began to stumble away desperately gasping for air through his punctured lung as blood gurgled out of his mouth. The wound inflicted by Snake Eyes wasn’t fatal, but he was in no condition to fight. As he made his way towards what he thought was safety, a voice cried out. It was Snake Eyes’ comrade. She caressed his lifeless body on the ground and peered up at the assassin. Her eyes were like daggers staring into his soul. She wasted no time. She unsheathed her sword and charged the assassin. Storm Shadow cried, “You are dishonorable, you dare attack a wounded warrior!” The comrade ignored the assassin’s words and continued slashing the sword with extreme violence. Storm Shadow cried again, “Patience little one, I will return for your life another day.” Storm Shadow used his uncanny powers of stealth to elude the comrade in an attempt to evade and escape. His hands rapidly formed ancient symbols one after another. He waived his arm slowly and whether through an ancient technique to hypnotize one’s enemy or perhaps the assassin’s demonic supernatural powers, he was able to attack his enemy’s vision. The comrade experienced the same thing that Snake Eyes did. The comrade’s vision suddenly blurred and the comrade completely lost sight of Storm Shadow. But one thing Storm Shadow could not have known was that this particular soldier did not rely on her vision to fight. She paused and cautiously advanced with her sword tightly clutched by her side. She then realized she was under his spell. She looked across the horizon. She saw nothing yet she still felt his presence. She knew he was still nearby but her vision was clouded by his technique. So she decided to use a technique of her own as her blind ninja master so dutifully trained her to. She slowly wrapped her blindfold over her eyes. PLAY THIS SONG WHILE READING THE REST OF THE STORY She no longer saw the golden rays of sunlight stretching across the sky from the setting sun. Gone were visions of the pink clouds and the fire from the burning wreckage nearby. She was wrapped in total darkness. She stepped slowly across the field. From a distance, Storm Shadow silently studied his enemy. He had never seen a technique like this. The warrior in him would not allow him to simply retreat without testing this opponent’s skill. As she stepped towards him, she felt his presence getting stronger and she focused her mind on the noises around her. Nothing else mattered to her. Her mind’s singular focus was on the noise and the noises suddenly began coming to her slower and slower. She heard the grass gently sway across the meadow. She singled out ever peep, every breath of the wind, and every leaf blowing on the trees. Everything in motion on that field gently unfolded as if they were careful not to disturb her concentration. The grass blew cautiously, the trees swayed in fear, and even the fire from the burning wreckage began to die. And suddenly, she began to hear a distinct high pitch ringing sound. It began ringing louder and louder. It was coming from her left side. She whipped her sword in defense and clashed with a throwing star. “There he was,” she thought to herself, “to the left!” She charged in that direction and slashed her sword again. Her katanna met with a loud clash. She realized immediately that she made contact with Storm Shadow’s sword. She spun around and moved to her right and slashed her sword upward. Again, the swords clash, this time it was louder and more violent than the last. She could tell by the way Storm Shadow had defended himself from her attacks that he was losing strength so she remained aggressive and charged again. She slashed her sword downward as fast as she could. There was nothing there but silence. She paused. Once again, she began to focus on the noise. Suddenly, she heard a footstep. “There, ten yards away to her right” she thought to herself. She charged again but this time, there was another distinct sound. It was a high pitch ringing sound. It came down on her as she charged, she raised her sword up and it met with another loud clash. She had made contact with Storm Shadow’s long sword, but there was another ringing sound. This one darted towards her body. It was a piercing sound. It was Storm Shadow’s short sword stabbing towards her. She arched her back and leaned back as fast and as far as she could. She felt the air brush against her body as Storm Shadow’s sword grazed by narrowly missing her. She spun around as close to the ground as possible and slash her sword upwards. She heard his clothing tear. She felt the unmistakable vibrations caused by cutting through flesh as they travelled down her sword to her hands. She felt his warm blood spray over her hands. She even smelled his blood in the air. She slashed her sword once more, but there was nothing. He was gone once again. And once again, she focused on the noise. His presence was getting weaker. He was retreating from their fight but she knew exactly where he was retreating to. She followed her instincts. She pursued him into the nearby woods. There, the trees were in bloom. She could smell the flowers. She heard the leaves blow in the breeze. She heard the flower petals frolicking in the wind. And she heard a noise that did not belong in the woods. She heard the sound of his blood drip on the ground. He was ten yards away to her left, she was sure of it. She could smell the iron in his blood from that direction. This time, she didn’t attack him right away. She said to him, “Assassin, you think that you could escape me by running into this forest? You think the noise here will distract me? You think I won’t be able to fight you with these trees in the way? I don’t need to see you to kill you. I know exactly where every tree is. And I know exactly where you stand. You killed my mentor, nothing can save you from me!” She charged at him, leaped in the air and with a long stride, she slashed downward. She heard the distinct ringing sound of his sword coming up at her, but this time, instead of meeting his sword, she tucked her body and tumbled to the ground. She rolled behind him, turned around, and slashed her sword upward. And this time, she felt her sword cutting through flesh and bone. She then heard a thump on the ground ten yards away to her left. She was certain she had severed a body part. She remained completely still and she felt a heavier thump on the ground right next to her where Storm Shadow last stood. She then heard a repeated noise on the ground right next to her. It was like a heartbeat writhing in pain, fear, and panic. The sound was regular and repeating. She realized immediately, she was victorious. After remaining perfectly still for a moment, she slowly removed her blindfold. She looked to her right where she felt the heavy thump and there was Storm Shadow’s body. His leg was twitching as his body found itself in sudden panic. She looked to her left, ten yards away where she heard the first thump on the ground. And there, she saw Storm Shadow’s head. She walked back to the wreckage to complete her mission. She found Cover Girl, still on the ground but alive. She knelt down and verified Cover Girl’s identity. Cover Girl was barely conscience. Cover Girl looked up at her. Injured and covered in her own blood, Cover Girl mustered all her strength and asked “who are you?” But weakened from her injuries, Cover Girl quickly passed out after asking her question. PLAY THIS SONG WHILE READING THE REST OF THE STORY She checked Cover Girl’s vitals and sent the signal to General Hawk: mission accomplished. She then looked across the battle field. She saw burning wreckage, and the dead bodies of Crimson Guard Dragoons as well as her own comrade and beloved mentor, Snake Eyes’ lifeless body. She then looked down at the helpless Rebel Angel, Cover Girl and said, “I’m Jinx.” * MAD LOVE TO SAMURAI CHAMPLOO, it was the inspiration for all of part 127 of this RA verse.
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01-23-2012, 04:37 AM | #3 |
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01-23-2012, 05:01 AM | #4 |
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Im so glad i stayed up. I am your biggest fan. Your originality is always incredible! Shes simple and beautiful from the flower to the chopsticks. Bravo.
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01-23-2012, 05:02 AM | #5 |
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BIG THANKS TO OUR BUDDY OBI for sending me some decent swords. I owe you.
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01-23-2012, 05:21 AM | #6 |
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outstanding custom...superb dio and story.
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01-23-2012, 05:27 AM | #7 |
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OH SHIT! That is just...wow...I'm at a loss of words here. BRAVO!
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01-23-2012, 05:48 AM | #8 |
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Great work...great custom...good story...nice use of soundtrack...innovative...well done...A+
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01-23-2012, 07:08 AM | #9 |
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Awesome!
And that's about all I can say. . . . That and I wish I could mak a custom that perfect!!! I will now scour my parts bins for the pieces and try. . . |
01-23-2012, 07:24 AM | #10 |
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Thats a bad ass custom. What is the recipe? Where did you get the hat?
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