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06-10-2009, 07:11 PM | #1 |
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but at least I can write about them. If there is a poet or person who appreciates the language, then maybe you likey.
Far beyond outer limitation, Defying expectation, Bequeathing a reputation; It is with this I warrant thee deputation, Of a love not bestowed on some trifling indignation, Yet upon an energy, a soul of such wondrous incarnation— That to which a hardened heart longs for the unsought sensation— Generating life anew into an insensible self-castigation. Thou art a rose, growing, fresh as First creation, And not of complexity, but of beautiful configuration; An exquisiteness unseen by common population, For the bud is to be discerned by one who gives it deserved personification. May thy searching petals find true revelation— In Love’s obsequious manifestation— Unplucked to grow and grow, for thy own consideration. |
06-10-2009, 07:14 PM | #2 |
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06-10-2009, 07:15 PM | #3 |
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i guess that makes this a poetry thread!
“The Sting Luau” By Gary M Head An artemis, monogamous as a splint. They sell deodorant on the moon. Hermes returns as a tile, on its way to a wall unusurped, a Sentry-Minded bon-bon. Though continuity re-salutes its cone of nuance they fondue crime and then corn Hades-marie. leader calyxes that stretch some armor to fit like hoax mollusks. In’tune with laurel-white out of my blood vessels the way the half-ox reacts to the show’biz of my sleigh-arm my son is infallible prometheus is his rash. Telepath with Pike or smelt before my grandfather’s catch meters through the darks and cobies of Jupiter’s fishing moon worm-mancing, half his thumb gone. We’ll heed the snipped pincher of him as the venom takes cork in the spray
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06-10-2009, 07:17 PM | #4 |
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06-10-2009, 07:18 PM | #5 |
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i guess that makes this a poetry thread!
“The Sting Luau” By Gary M Head An artemis, monogamous as a splint. They sell deodorant on the moon. Hermes returns as a tile, on its way to a wall unusurped, a Sentry-Minded bon-bon. Though continuity re-salutes its cone of nuance they fondue crime and then corn Hades-marie. leader calyxes that stretch some armor to fit like hoax mollusks. In’tune with laurel-white out of my blood vessels the way the half-ox reacts to the show’biz of my sleigh-arm my son is infallible prometheus is his rash. Telepath with Pike or smelt before my grandfather’s catch meters through the darks and cobies of Jupiter’s fishing moon worm-mancing, half his thumb gone. We’ll heed the snipped pincher of him as the venom takes cork in the spray |
06-10-2009, 07:27 PM | #6 |
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what format?
after five years of poetry major-ing in college and co-editing the Columbia College Chicago Poetry Review i'm very comfortable with my format
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06-10-2009, 07:31 PM | #7 |
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Not an insult, just odd that you are not capitalizing and the line breaks seem so random.
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06-10-2009, 07:39 PM | #8 |
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Yo; I've seen child blossom to man,
some withered and turned to murderers Led astray by the liars death glorifiers observin us Watching us close, marking our toast ?? purposely overtaxin the earnings Nervous, burning down the churches They're scared of us, rather beware than dare to trust Always in jail, million dollar bail, left there to rust Let's call in order, give ourselves a chance to enhance broader Advance to where minorities are the majority voter Holdin my own, I'm livin alone in this cold world My sister just bought a home without a loan, you go girl! She's an exception, some people can leap to the impression See, me myself, I start flippin and fall victim to deep depression I'm stressin the issue here, so we can cross the fiscal year Tired of gettin fired and hired as a pistol-eer There's no longevity living off negativity Fuck it, I'd rather sell reefer than do pizza delivery That's how the city be, everybody gettin they hustle on Judge singin death penalty like it's his favorite fuckin song Word is bond, takin my life you know they lovin it God 'F' the government and it's fuckin capital punishment! - BIG PUN
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06-10-2009, 07:57 PM | #9 |
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Woke up
didn't choke up got my AK it was broke up put it back together liked a jigsaw grabbed my 9 and my rambo knife off the floor went to the bathroom to beat the rush who the fuck used my toothbrush went to my sisters room punched her in the eye hit her in the stomach then stabbed her in the thigh elbow to the throat a knee to the chest went back to my room and finished getting dressed. now its the gangsta rap thread (insert gang sign here) |
06-10-2009, 07:58 PM | #10 |
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Nice poem. I can appreciate good poetry because I am a poet myself and I can rap too. I came up with a rap for my co-workers at Michaels and my friends:
You can usually find me on Facebook or down over at Michaels I work the long hours which are divided into cycles You know i'm unpredictable because you never know what to expect I don't just live for myself I'm out to earn people's respect That's how I roll, people I like to do things my way I'm just like a superhero because i'm here to save the day Sometimes I feel unstoppable obstacles fall as I persevere nothing seems to faze me because I have no fear Ever since my transformation I see everything with clarity and when it comes to friendships I treat them like a rarity Life keeps getting better blessings are pouring out like rain I have learned how to suppress the stress in life and the pain The fire within me continues to burn and ignite knowing my purpose here is to do what is right I'm out here with a mission to bring hope to all around me I forget about the past and try to be the best I can be Get ready to fly with the phoenix that soars because the future is bright leaving many open doors Live in hope and happiness not in stress and sorrow so that you don't have to worry about what comes at you tomorrow |
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