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03-27-2015, 04:40 AM | #1 |
Iron Grenadier
Join Date: Feb 2007
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For those of you who know....I'm a Writer. I wrote plays mostly for my University but I've been working on scripts and stories in general for years. So I moved back home and found my outline for my take on Joe 3. completely fan fiction and I posted this on the joe group on facebook but I figured you guys would like it too..So here it is
G.I.Joe 3: Retribution Starts with a cold opening a semi truck driving through the Nevada desert behind the wheel is Roadblock behind him is a group of men on bikes with modified trucks with improvised weaponry on them "drednok" is emblazoned on the sides of the vehicles. We see what the truck is carrying...Destro is in the back of the trailer with Flint and jinx. Flint contacts lady Jaye who is opening fire on the group following them from the passenger's side "Drednoks: some kind of hillbilly PMC. they want cromedome mighty bad." Things are looking their worse when in the back of it all there's a black motorcycle catching up with the dreds. Snake-eye in a trench coat catches up to the largest vehicle and jumps on top of it. Cutting up the driver. A spectacular ninja fight happens as lady Jaye provides cover fire. Roadblock sees SE about to get overwhelmed and turns to lady Jaye "you drive stick?" Lady Jaye reply "I don't know? Can you?" He hands the wheel over to Jaye getting on top of the semi he opens a compartment on the top of the trailer. A MGL is in it. Roadblock takes aim blows some of the remaining vehicles away. Snake-eye uses this as a chance to jump on the trailer and pull his sword out as he jumps again on to a pick up truck he stabs the gunner and grabs the driver out of the truck as the now deserted truck crashes in to the last vehicle SE and RB returns to the semi they park the semi at what looks like an old army base and while the other joes get out of the semi with Destro in chains flint looks back at the miles of flames and metal. "Mission Accomplished? Sir. Block flips him the bird as the screen cuts to black G.I. JOE 3 appears on the screen. -after the opening scene we are treated to a debriefing in the Nevada PITT. The hunt for remaining cobra forces has lead to three targets the enigmatic Crimson Twins who own Extensive Enterprises and major Bludd a mercenary whose been recruiting for Cobra since MARS the joes know they are getting closer and closer but they still feel like they are spinning their wheels. We see the first time Flint brings up asking to Marry Lady Jaye after the meeting with Roadblock. -the Crimson court scene the court it's self is a room bathed in red light were we see the commander commend the Twins for being loyal to cobra even after all the set backs Tomax and Xamot present to the commander the B.A.T prototype and the outline for the SNAKE armor. The twins leave with their private guards the Crimson guard. -back at the PITT the joes are relaxing block trys to play video games but keeps flashing back to the ambush. SE and SS are playing darts while flint and Jaye talk about the future. Roadblock can't take it any more and leaves.. he heads to the brig where they keep Destro The brig is this giant glass room you know the kind. Destro proceeds to tell Roadblock about the Twins and the Major. The major has a cybernetic arm with a MARS tracking device installed Destro give roadblock the code in exchange for knowing about Ana. -the team now knowing where Bludd is at (west Africa) move out. They start tracking the good major through a town where SE notices a girl with red hair....he reports to RB there might be more going on here. the major is about to get away when he is tackled by Shipwreck who has a stand off with Flint and Lady Jaye "US government Identify yourself" "it's ok I'm with the Joes"...confusion sets in as RB SE And SS show up just as Scarlett reveals herself.."so...we need to explain somethings" -Scarlett and the rest of the RoC joes meet with Roadblocks team....it's goes as well as it could until Breaker shows a hologram of the general telling them to bring RBs team back to the ROCK. a coastal base that the General kept hidden from the president when Joe was downsized -General Hawk explains what happened. The mission that ended with Ripcord dying revealed that members of the military and government had been infiltrated by Cobra and he needed to know who he could trust...Duke stayed as his eyes and ears in joe.. Roadblock is taken back his best friend was a spy. General Hawk knows about the teams actions and knows they are on the up and up so he shares some information the twins location...a technology/weapons expo in Tokyo SE and SS agree to go. Before SE goes he gives Scarlett a dried rose. -The rest of the joes both old and new try to get to know each other block and SE are sparring SS is getting the fuzzy eyeball from the RoC guys "Things have changed... I have changed" Shipwreck sees the sparring and being the person he is he challenges then both "Sambo, muey Thai a little cqd I bet I can take both of you." Road and SE are dismissive at first but agree and to both their surprise ship holds his own at least for a little bit....the ice is broken and our heroes are united for now.....Bludd is locked up and uses the down time to message cc through his cybereye.....he reports the location of the ROCK as we see a mass of BATS are completed and ready. -the interrogation of Bludd starts with Scarlett trying to get information about the commanders whereabouts the scene starts to go down hill when shipwreck sees Bludds confiscated dogtags with the names of his CO and former SEAL team members. He barges in and starts being bad cop. Bludd tells the joes they'll be dead in an hour as the attack begins. -BATS flood the base the joes fight them off as best as they could but can't go on to much longer...General Hawk tells then to leave he'll blow the base and make sure the bats don't leave shipwreck refuses to go "it's not my first court marshal won't be my last" He agrees but hates it shipwreck has a fight with Bludd where he loses but roadblock intervenes saving shipwreck. The team find shipwrecks boat and leaves the rock....they wait for the boom to come....it never does....we see the general being captured by Bludd. - the joes make it to the US Flagg another thing Hawk hid from the government "hey aircraft carriers go missing from dry dock all the time" -SE and SS meet with Jinx as they spy on the twins there's a real spy feel going on as the twins evade the ninjas and soon reveal their weird connection the twins Learn about Bludds victory and decide it's time to leave Tokyo for EE headquarters The ninjas follow them to a dance club the twins front in Tokyo and have a fight with the CeeGees the twins escape but SE bugs the helicopter they are on... -back on the flagg breaker who kept a BAT head hacks its system saying he might get a trace on where the bats come from or where they were being Controlled at least. While they wait the joes lick their wounds And connect somewhere flint Shipwreck and RB have a few beers and let's the good times roll.....Scarlett and Jaye are hanging out. Scarlett is worried about SE but knows he'll make it reveals she loves SE and being away just cleared things up for her.....Breaker reveals the location of where the bats came from...Saudi Arabia. The joes head out to the Extensive Enterprises headquarters -its not right the lights are on but no one is home the team (Flint Ship Jaye RB and Scarlett search the place and finds nothing so of course they prepare for an ambush..CeeGees pour and the joes hold out as long as they can...til they are captured. -the joes wake up chained to chairs while the twins and CGs watch over them Tomax begins to wax poetic about how if they tell them where the others are they will kill them quickly.they refuse so Xomat begins to torture lady Jaye with a cattle prod Jaye won't break though flint tells Xamot he'll kill him. Tomax then tells them if they won't talk there will be consequences...Bludd brings in a bloody general hawk bludd begins to beat the general he then pulls his gun out and points at Hawk shipwreck breaks his ropes and tries to fight Bludd off but bludd gains control and forces shipwreck to shoot Hawk with his own gun after which he is knocked to the ground where he sees bludd kick Hawk to the ground put his boot on his head shoot hawk in the head....Shipwreck and the rest lose it. We see bludd take the Generals tags and walks away.... -the CGs have been ordered by the twins to execute the joes when they left and are about to put a bullet in RBs head when the CG is hit with a sniper round a flash bang follows as SS and Jinx kill the other CGS while SE provides over watch the group makes their way through the building carrying shipwreck and Lady Jaye to the exit. They encounter a platoon of bats that rise out of the desert sand only to have them be taken out by heavy duty flying the howler the joes escape and head back to the flagg - at the flagg tempers flare and emotions boil over flint finally asks jaye and promises her Xamot will pay. Breaker reveals he's created a virus to destroy the bats and SE tells the guys about the tracker has lead them to an island in the Gulf of Mexico...a cobra island if you will. The joes prepare for an attack on the island. - the joes use the flagg to soften up the defenses on the island while they land a WHALE on the beach head and storm the temple breaker and heavy defend the flagg against bats and CGs while the rest of the team assaults the fortress SE and SS face off with the twins while shipwreck tracks down bludd. Scarlett jinx Jaye and flint attack the Bat control center. Roadblock makes his way in to the inter chambers and finds the commander in the finalized SNAKE Armor...the final battle begins -SE and SS can't keep up with the twins until storm shadow realizes how the twins work he uses the Arashikage mindset on Tomax breaking the connection with his brother and his mind. Xamot runs in to the jungle towards the BCC. Shipwreck finally beats bludd by sticking his knife Into his cyber arm causing a small explosion mortally wounding bludd. The virus breaker was working is downloaded in to the bats lady Jaye takes out a Ariel drone with a SMAAW and they begin to shutdown flint starts heading to the temple prime and runs in to Xamot....Xamot trys to talk his way out of the situation only for flint to shoot him twice in the gut and leave him. -the RB and CC fight drags on til roadblock sticks a grenade to the armor breaking it with the commander finally down fighting to the last RB breaks his neck and cobra is finished. -the aftermath has the joes on the island while the US Army secures the site with tomax and bludd being taken in....Shipwreck flips bludd the bird. Xamot and CC are confirmed dead and joes celebrate ship calls Cover girl snake eyes and Scarlett embrace and Lady Jaye accepts flint proposal. Admiral keel haul (played by Michael Rooker) shows up and says Hawks remains were recovered and buried and thanks to another general. JOE is fully funded by the US and UN. A YO JOE!!! Ends the film. As the credits end we see the island abandoned with a figure walking to the broken helmet of the commander...he picks it up "the king is dead" He smashes the helmet "long live the king" as the faint shadow of a man in serpent armor fades. Notes General Hawks team is made up of Shipwreck, Breaker, Scarlett, Heavy-duty and possibly spirit or wild bill or beachhead -Colton is mentioned as retired and won't be seen unless willis stops being a jerk. - SS is working with the joes mostly as penance for the past and he is wearing some white digital camo...wonder where that comes from... -the mission where Ripcord was killed on lead to Hawk finding out some people in the military and government were Cobra he and alpha team except for Duke left Joe so they could pursue them without fear of being found out. -the relationship between Flint, roadblock and Shipwreck rocky at the start shipwreck doesn't trust blocks team because of the infiltration and block thinks ship is a show off and a smart ass...Flint is trying to balance out both. -Major Bludd has a cyborg arm that launches wrist rockets. He's armed with a plasma rifle and 44. Magnum -Shipwreck loves the MAUL shotgun and carries two of them plus a mean looking knife -Flint and Lady Jaye are together and Flint is trying to pop the question -Tomax and Xamot twin powers are more fleshed out and maybe the work of nanomites but basically Xamot... the fighter focused his body on fighting so Tomax knows everything about fighting Xamot does meanwhile tomax...the planner makes sure they both on the same page when scheming. The mind set destroys the connection and may have killed tomax. -shipwreck has a boat that keeps getting compared to a rusted out van or mobile probable cause. -Scarletts crossbow from RoC shows up again and she has a full sized one she uses to Launch explosive arrows during the final battle. Her melee skills are really shown during the escape from EE scene. Breaker is mostly behind the computer screen this time around. But he does take out a bat and finds out where EEs headquarters is and destroys the bats programing. -heavy duty uses that mini gun most of the time also commands the Flaggs defenses against the bats during the final battle. SE keeps it simple Mp7 and a katana during the escape from EE scene he takes out the ceegee about to kill Roadblock with a barret.50. Also expect non stop ninja action while he jinx and SS are in Japan looking for the twins. SS 1911 and two samurai swords..he's wearing white digital camo. He uses the arashikage mindset to break the twins Connection causing Tomax to have a near fatal breakdown. Tomax in the Crimson court scenes wears crimson robes outside of that a blue suit and red tie. He's a planner and tactician all he knows about fighting he knows from Xamot. Almost dies by Storm Shadow breaking his link with Xamot. Xamot is a brute charming psychotic. Wears a red military uniform outside of the court scenes and during the escape from EE scene he tortures lady Jaye and shoots General Hawk a couple times...he survives the fight between him SE tomax and Storm Shadow only for flint to shoot him in the gut. One twin will survive that's all I can say. BATs are evil looking combat Droids think a combo of the V1 and sigma six versions. The Commander is very much in an emperor Palpatine roll in this working on the BATS and the SNAKE armor...fights Roadblock to the death in his battle armor. so what do you think Blockbuster or Direct to DVD.
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