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07-24-2013, 10:03 AM | #1 |
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So with the DVD/Blu-Ray release coming in less than a week and with the digital already available the threads of how it sucked, what could have/should have been done are popping up again as they did when the movie hit theaters...so with that being said let's hear your idea, your pitch to Paramount, not just "Zartan sucked" "Flint was Falcon" "Blind Master is Jar Jar" let's hear an actual pitch, show us how you could do better than Hollywood or at least John Chu...
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07-24-2013, 10:27 AM | #2 |
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...A Bus pulls up to the Stanton Isand Chaplans assistans Motor pool, a guy in plain green Fatigues gets off of the bus holding orders for a Pirvate Graves, who walks into the Garage and a greasy dude with a non regulation beard rolls out from under a modified 2 seater rear engine all terrain vehicle made by...Lamborghini? The lift appears to have the clearence and hydraulics for decending as well as lifting vehicles. Just as Private Graves gets a look of confusion in his eyes, the rock radio station playing in the background goes to static...replaced suddenly by a screaching hiss from a man saying
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07-24-2013, 10:33 AM | #3 |
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Okay that's one...
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07-24-2013, 10:57 AM | #4 |
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I have a whoel treatmeant starting from there.
Ill have to summarize. Basicly through grunt showinmg up as #13 we are instruduced to a small ultra elite unit, he doesnt understand why he has been selected for it and it blows his mind what all is going on underneath that motor pool. As he shows up Cobra ...until this point known only to Hawk and Scarlet, disrupts the entire communications infrastructure of the norther hemissphere and announces they are holing teh world trading and communications infrastructure for a ransom of XXX square miles of isolated land for teh start of a new nation. Grunt is given on breifing in which Hawk assigns tdy MOSs for the other existing 12 members and the Joes are sent to just striaght up mount a conventional raid on a single Installation deep in the Middle eastern desert ( never says which country so we dont annoy any allies) we see shots of order breaking down everywhere JUST due to lack of communications infratsructure. The Joes airlift in and are quickly overwhelmed by an enourmous force of PLain Cobra troops hidden in countersunk bunkers surrounding the target facility. Steeler Shortfuse Hawk grandslam flash and scarlet are introduced setting up a FOB to support a quick strike infantry forward unit led By Stalker consisting of Himself, Rock and roll, Breaker, Snake eyes, Zap and the the mechanic we met Clutch and New guy Grunt. The next scene is very important and the Major thing I feel is missing in a lot of Joe Media...Remember the firt year merch wwhere there was a lot of scenes where the Joes were fighting out of a ridge or foxhole? Well in this scene the forward group gets pinned down in a blast crater, the Va,p is trashed Clutch is bad hurt and in this scene it is critical that we show these guys depend on each other fight with heart for each other and will lay downh their lives for each other and the mission. Scarlet and Hawk KNow3 what these guys are up against, only they have seen the intel so they mount an all out technical effort to suppress the enemy artillary and armor, Braker has to improvise an EMP Morse code signal that Scarlet is sharp enough to pick up on so she grabsd a med kit hops on a RAM and charges across no mans land to get to Clucth and to breif these gius on everything she knows, she take a superficial wound on teh way. At this point stalker looks at snake eyes and they just bum rush the installations from gate. Grunt takes one look at what is happeneing and with no orders except his own initiative follows them, R&R and Zap poke out of cover for supressing fire And those three guys just viciuosly slaughter their way to the front gate and do not stop until they are at the inner keep of the fortification..Stalker gets the ordnance from a peice of cobra artillary and feild improvises it as a charge to blow open the keeps main bunker door. I have teh rest of this worked out and have for years, but this is teh first act and we have established the mythos. I will add teh rest when I have a little more time. |
07-24-2013, 11:50 AM | #5 |
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Cobra Commander arrives on Cobra Island (seen briefly in trailers). As he debarks the helicopter he's greeted by a large Cobra army of various styled troopers. Vehicles and helicopters can be seen in the distance (new versions of Stingers and Fangs). At the front of the troops are Black-Out, Major Bludd, Scrap-Iron, a new female Cobra (Munitia, Armada, Cassandra Knox, someone that is menacing and sexy), as well as a Cobra computer expert.
He addresses the troops, giving a speech. Turning to the computer guy he asks if all is ready. The guy says the trojan virus that zartan planted in the computers is working, they have access to everything. Turning he looks at two men, twins, who are approaching. They are wearing suits and accompaning by other men, all generic looking individuals, in suits. CC tells them all "initiate phase II" Start the credits for G.I. Joe: The Revenge of Cobra Three Months Later Washington D.C., Secretary of Defense is walking out of a building and into a limo. He's on the phone talking about the weakened status of the PResident and the US after the Cobra take-over and Zartan. He's angry, saying things will get better. The car drives off. Further down the road, a van pulls out in front of the car. The van's rear doors open to reveal Scrap Iron and a missle launcher. He blows up the limo. "Target down", he says. Outside a white house. Joe Colton walks out to get the paper. Headline says something about how bad the US is right now. A bullet takes out Colton, hitting him in the head. Pan to the trees and hills across the street. Black-Out is lowering his rifle. "Target down," he says. Nevada Desert Two figures get up off the ground, adjusting their clothes and dusting themselves off. It's obvious they've been fooling around. Zoom in and see Lady Jaye and Flint (an excuse to have LJ in jogging outfit again). They make small talk and Flint says they better hurry back before they're missed. Lady Jaye says "race you" and takes off. Scene of the two runnign through the desert, straight runs, up and down hills, etc.. Pan out and see them running towards a military installation nestled against a mountain. A couple of quonset huts, barbed wire fencing and a gate. They enter the empty facility and go into one of the huts. Inside are a couple of soldiers, one of them an indian, who ask for the day's code. Flint "You just saw us an hour ago, Spirit" "Still need the code". They give it and a cabinet on the back wall is opened to reveal an staircase down. They descend into the PIT, passing by a training area filled with about a dozen soldiers all working out, training, with a shooting range in the background. They pass by some vehicles, a new VAMP/Skyhawk/MRAP-style. They're nearing a door marked "Barracks" when a female soldier, blond with glasses, walks over. "Hawk needs you in the command center" "Thanks Dial-Tone". They get into another elevator and step out into the command center. They walk over to Hawk who is there with Roadblock. "We have some bad news Jaye. Colton was murdered." More to come..........
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