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02-06-2009, 03:37 PM | #1 |
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Ok, im planning a fan fic with a few custom figures to go along with it (action shots maybe?). so far its called Lord of the Flys. and its about firefly failing to kill a few green shirts due to snake eyes interference and cobra commanders paranoia plants the idea that firefly purposely failed and is a double agent. Imediatly he sends a detachment of vipers and a few hiss tanks to find firefly on his recent assignment in alaska. firefly however has a few "desciples" for the day he dies. and they come to his aid. flint intercepts the vipers orders and decides to attack the cobra team from behind but when duke refuses to help flint,stalker, and snake eyes go on an off the books mission....sorry for the rant and poor grammar but thats the premise so far. any suggestions to make this better/help the process?
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02-06-2009, 03:46 PM | #2 |
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What's the motivation for the Joe team to go and help Firefly?
Technically, Firefly is a mercenary, so he should fail at the job, not give the money back, and CC is upset about that.
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02-06-2009, 03:53 PM | #3 |
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thanks! i wanted a no way out situation i guess. and i thought flint would see it tacticaly sound to eliminate some cobra special forces and hiss tanks while theyre distracted and possibly eliminate firefly.
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02-06-2009, 03:56 PM | #4 |
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It might make some more sense if Firefly's fate is bound to something readers can sympathize with. Eg: Firefly has set up to defend against Cobra in a small town and, as such, the town's fate is tied to his > motivation for GI Joe to help him.
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02-06-2009, 03:58 PM | #5 |
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a very good suggestion, but as a merc i think hed be more interested in his own hide. Keep the ideas coming please!
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02-06-2009, 04:00 PM | #6 |
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Its more a story of a confluence of interests. GI Joe wants to protect the town, Firefly is hiding in the town, and as a result GI Joe is defending Firefly. Just my 2 cents. Hope you can work it out! |
02-06-2009, 04:04 PM | #7 |
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ahhh i gotcha! thank you. ill deff try and work that in. also allows for more joes to get involved : )
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02-06-2009, 04:41 PM | #8 |
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I like the town idea. That works really well for why the Joes get involved and sets up a 3-way confrontation.
The Joes vs. Firefly vs. Cobra. Firefly can set the Joes and Cobra forces up against eachother to work his escape. Also, assassinating some greenshirts? Why would Cobra Commander hire Firefly for that? Needs to be something really important for CC to hire Firefly, and for CC to be so upset at Firefly for failing that he'd try to eliminate Firefly. Maybe Firefly escapes with something that CC wants badly, but Firefly won't give it up for some reason?
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02-06-2009, 04:44 PM | #9 |
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Also, have Firefly wire the town with explosives (alot of 'em at different locations and different kinds of ways of setting 'em off).
So Firefly calls in the Joes to stop Cobra and he blackmails them by holding the town essentially hostage. So the Joes go in with a three-pronged move, 1 unit to stop Cobra, another unit to try and capture Firefly and another unit to find and disable the bombs. So now you have all these forces running around a town, with Cobra there going wild (and Joes having to protect civilians), all with Firefly pulling everyone's strings to get what he wants.
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02-06-2009, 04:52 PM | #10 |
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AWSOME IDEAS! i like where this is going and you guys are a HUGE help! as for the green shirt problem, agreed. should be more important. I was thought a little about green berets or joes (some kind of important group) transporting missile codes or something along those lines and when firefly gets them he keeps them and withdraws all money from his swiss accounts and goes into hiding. (enter the town and all that)
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