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03-02-2012, 07:03 AM | #1 |
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Good morning tankers, in tradition of a comic book letters page and to keep only authored posts and bumps in my fanfic, "the Crimson Cloth" I've created a seperate thread here for the discussion of my fan fic which will hopefully help elicit some readership and interest. I'm going to announce a contest of some sort at some point but hopefully the content will keep you coming back. So from this point forward please only BUMP "The Crimson Cloth" and save all your actual posting for here in "The Keepers of the Cloth".
Thank you for your support. Last edited by Viper6; 03-02-2012 at 07:24 AM.. |
03-02-2012, 07:10 AM | #2 |
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Haha!! I feel that ol'school Letters page nostalgia comin' on; NICE!!!
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03-02-2012, 07:19 AM | #3 |
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Thanks Neuspeaq, im going to try and respond to posts here as they are made, much more immediate than the ole monthly redress we got from our superhero rags back in the day and while I'm no stan lee or todd mcfarlane I'll do my best. I'll aslo try and give a weekly update and elicit some opinions from the fans as well. Anyone know how an author can track subscribers? Im thinking of including in the contest rules a posting and subscription requirement. I know at this point the prize will be CG related. Thats all for now. Thanks again for your support.
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03-03-2012, 11:07 AM | #4 |
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additional scenes added today. Hope everyone is enjoying the character and plot development. I was concerned being so far in without a big boom or a trigger pull, but I didnt want to rush it either. when it all pops off, it will hopefully come together exceptionally well. Keep it Crimson!
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03-04-2012, 09:29 PM | #5 |
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I have to say, EXCELLENT writing so far, its top notch!!!
I understand what you mean about controlling the pace. When you first would get agitated over the light-speed escalation over at the OJS Thread, I didn't quite understand. After a while later, (you'd been gone for some time,) I'd begun to see what you mean. It was beginning to read like some campy over-dramatic comic. It was a real shame too, cuz there were a couple Brilliant plot devices introduced in it that were overshadowed by the rampant escalation. So, as far as MY fanfic, I'm takin' my cues from you; make sure the build-up's strong before any drama takes place... Thanx for that... BTW, it was a brilliant move making Chuckles an adept practitioner of the art of Parkour, it makes Perfect sense!!! P.S. Did you notice how I (very subtly) tied my fanfic in with yours AND Pit Viper's?
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03-04-2012, 09:44 PM | #6 |
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Yeah brother, I grabbed that, appreciate the nod and nice work. I've been reading "Fixer" too, man, theres some talent here on the tank, shame hasbro doesnt encourage submissions; what a volume of short stories they could have, maybe a few novels too, shit'd sell for certain.
well look in on the cloth brother, its all kinds of shit hit'n the fan! Enjoy. Last edited by Viper6; 03-05-2012 at 10:53 AM.. |
03-05-2012, 10:59 AM | #7 |
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The newest offerings of the crimson cloth are posted just this morning and its coming off the leash as things get hot for the Joes at the Arbco garage. remember to subscribe to my fanfic for immediate updates and a chance to enter the upcoming contest (further details to be announced). If you like what your reading, refer a friend, with the right amount of readership/feedback, the story will go on.
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03-05-2012, 04:16 PM | #8 |
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Chapter 2 is underway and a few new posts have taken point, check out the action and get ready for whats in store!
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03-05-2012, 05:13 PM | #9 |
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Liking the "Cloth" more and more. Hoping "Fixer" and "Sleeping Sword" are updated as well.
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03-05-2012, 06:37 PM | #10 |
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Good to hear, and I hope it keeps getting better for ya!
I agree, my fellow wordsmiths Pitt Viper and NeuSpeaq are bringing it with their best on "Fixer" and "Sleeping Sword" its nice to see some talented fans get in on expanding the joe verse, one day our hard work will be rewarded (I have to have hope). |
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