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Old 04-06-2012, 09:04 PM   #71 (permalink)
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Old 04-08-2012, 01:22 AM   #72 (permalink)
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Old 04-09-2012, 02:54 PM   #73 (permalink)
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When the massive doors to the throne room opened unexpectedly, the Crimson Guardsmen immediately ceased their conversation and came sharlpy to attention with their rifles.

They stood motionless in the dancing firelight as the shadow of Cobra Commander stretched down the red carpeted aisle towards the empty thrown between them.

They swallowed hard as the supreme leader stood in the door way, backlit by the neon corridor, hands on his hips in a display of power and presence. The Vipers that served as his security escort filed in behind him and lined the aisle, four on either side, adopting a similar posture with their raised weapons.

As the doors sealed darkening the room, the Commander casually approached. His dress uniform was a light blue jacket festooned with braids and medals, a massive red cobra sigil framed by a double row of buttons terminating at the belt from which an ornate sword and holster swung from his hips. A crimson stripe ran the length of his pants which were tucked into highly polished boots. His face, known to no one, was concealed behind a solid chrome plate built into the blue steel helmet which was decorated with a thick silver stripe front to back. He paused and surveyed the sentries who watched their crimson reflections distorted in his face plate.

With a heavy sigh and dismissive gesture he addressed them "Oh, as you were Guardsmen." His voice was raspy, of a peculiar pitch, and unmistakable.
The Commander turned and settled into the soft cushion of the massive chair, his hands quickly seeking out the controls built into the arm rests brought them to life with a soft illumination. A dull hum that followed caused the large crystal like eyes of the serpents head to ignite and glow a brilliant red.
With another flick of his gloved finger tips a portal opened in the ceiling and the entire throne began to slowly rise, The Commander looked down to his right, his gaze meeting with the mask of the Guardsman watching his ascent.
"We'll discuss your sentiments later Guardsman...Less than Presidential, was that it?! is that what I am? Ah-hahaha-ha!"

His shrill and shrieking laughter was unsettling as it echoed in the chamber as the throne disappeared into the recess above. The Guardsmen looked briefly at one another fully regretting their seemingly conspiratorial conversation, mutually fearful of what end awaited them. No doubt each of them had at least considered fleeing the throne room and the terror drome altogether, but honor and duty would see them stand their ground and await their fate, if not then the lingering viper squad would certainly ensure it, and would also likely see them both escorted to the detention center upon the Commander's return.

"He singled me out, he knows it’s me that said..." The one Guardsman tried to alleviate the concerns of the other; who regarded him now with boiling hatred for luring him into a conversation which he now feared might cost him his life.
"DONT...FUCKING...SPEAK...TO ME" the other interrupted him with a warning as he averted his gaze.

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Old 04-09-2012, 07:00 PM   #74 (permalink)
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Old 04-26-2012, 11:18 AM   #75 (permalink)
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Beach Head sat at his desk in an office tucked in the rear of the TOC, his eyes strained as he poured through numerous intelligence information reports and analytical products pertaining to Arbco and the parking facility from which Flint was taken early this morning when a covert reconnaissance went awry.\

"I don’t know how you people make sense of this shit" he growled at Chuckles, who had recently changed into His familiar Hawaiian button up and OD cargo pants.

Chuckles grinned at Scarlett a.k.a. Shana O'hara, a very attractive and athletic thirty something Irish lass who served as G.I. Joe’s senior counterintelligence specialist and his section leader. Both now gave their attention to the Operations Sgt.

"So from what I'm reading..." Beach Head continued "and what all these damn diagrams, graphs, and other shit suggest, is that several hundred employees arrive at this garage on a daily basis and not but a fraction of em exit said facility to work in nearby offices all owned by Arbco, and this uh, what is it? Extensive Enterprises?"

"Exactly" Chuckles stopped pacing and reiterated the relationships that Arbco and Extensive Enterprises have with Cobra, the emerging terrorist network that had been their targeting focus for the last two years.

Scarlett cut him off as she noticed Beach Head roll his eyes and sigh, not a fan of Chuckles' enthusiastic dissertation.

"Chuckles, focus!" a snap of her fingers silenced the young operative as she leveled her beautiful green eyes on him.

"Beach is say’n there are several hundred personnel that do not leave that location daily, as we have discussed previously and as such we are by default dealing with previously unidentified sub levels which must support a variety of illicit activities tied to the organization. All attempts by our operatives to elicit information from Arbco and Extensive Enterprises personnel hasn’t provided us with anything substantial."

"Well Red..." Chuckles shot back, ever pushing boundaries calling her by her nick name; as a result of her near waist length wavy locks. She made him smile every time she walked in the room, even if she was Duke's girl, he couldn’t help himself.

"We have to assume that a portion of these people are para-militants and that we could be in for a helluva fight forcing our way into Arbco's basement, that guard didn’t hesitate to draw down or fire on Flint,...these people, this place, real bad news, ya dig?"

Beach Head interrupted "Let us remember we don’t have an OPORD to turn downtown into a warzone and from the extensive reading and entirely too long conversations with you two, I understand there’s a great deal of direct and indirect support for this Cobra organization, not just from local industry but on up through the damn government and even our military....explains a lot actually."

Chuckles set his jaw and nodded, overwhelmed by the obstacles. Scarlett moved to the computer and deftly displayed a biographic report on the wall sized monitor "This is our source, currently undergoing Arbco security training. We haven’t had contact with him in 30 days, two weeks ago his family perished in a house fire on the south end, it likely wasn’t an accident and we are considering this asset compromised...considering the lack of contact and the fact his transmitter has failed. He was our best hope to develop this thing..."

"Scarlet, can ya tell me something we can use to get flint back?" Beach Head reclined in his chair frustrated with the recovery effort.
"I’m sorry, Breaker's running some leads on our sources last known coordinates but..."

"On the facility Scarlett, the facility" Beach Head thrust a finger into the blue prints cluttering the desk top...."your source is dead.

"Well Beach..." she continued "we just don’t have enough intel to crash this party."

Chuckles tapped the desk in excitement, his eyes flashed with a wild idea exploding in his head "Red, bring up them overlays from department of transportation..." He nodded to himself and sprang towards the monitor gesturing at the subway system rail map.

Beach Head was unimpressed "Nope, already looked in on it Chucky, doesn’t connect, all the MAS/IMINT, everything we've gotten from the geospatial folks, and city hall, confirms that rail doesn’t service that site."

"Yea, I read that too Beach, but I'm not buying it! Consider this...." Chuckles traced the map and detoured off onto the decommissioned lines predating the active rail routes "See this?"

Scarlet grinned, she knew exactly where Chuckles was taking this and she immediately populated the historical data she knew he was about to prompt her for.

"Right on!" Chuckles jabbed a finger her way, acknowledging her quick thinking "Cobra....likely has a rail system piggybacking existing active routes and these older ones that are allegedly off line."

Scarlett added "and my best guess is they’re running beneath the existing lines to further shield the whole operation!"

Beach Head stood up "Son of a bitch, well aren’t you two a couple regular Dick Tracies! We need to confirm this, but assuming you’re right we need to breach that line and do a lil splunk’n!"
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Old 04-27-2012, 08:17 PM   #76 (permalink)
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okay I wrote this last lil bit at an off hour and just made a few minor edits to fix some shit. enjoy.

I'll be importing this all to blog format endof month bear with me til then and keep it cloth
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Old 05-01-2012, 07:53 PM   #77 (permalink)
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Great read...looking forward to more!
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Old 05-03-2012, 07:54 AM   #78 (permalink)
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thanks DRF007, glad youre enjoying the read. dont forget to visit the letters page also in my sig to further discuss the cloth, i try to keep questions commentary criticism and general discussion over there to ease the read here. but moving to a blog soon so that should solve the interuption issue ;)
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Old 05-04-2012, 02:02 PM   #79 (permalink)
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Old 05-04-2012, 10:27 PM   #80 (permalink)
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spread the good word war, i want hasbro clamoring for me to write joe shit;)
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