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01-15-2012, 03:09 PM | #1 |
Cobra Soldier
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GI JOE: Raining Death
by Brewhaha a 24 page stand alone issue Page 1 (six panels) Panel 1: A semi truck driving straight for camera view. Its lights are on as it is dark and snowy. CAPTION: WHEN I WA SEVEN YEARS OLD MY FATHER, WHO WAS A WATCH MAKER, EXPLAINED HOW THE WORLD WORKED. Panel 2: (Birds eye): The 18-wheeler drives down a winding snowy path. It is the only vehicle on the country road. CAPTION:LIFE CAN SEEM OVERWHELMING AT FIRST, BUT BECOMES MUCH CLEARER WHEN YOU UNDERSTAND THAT EVERYTHING IS A SYSTEM. CAPTION: SMALL PARTS OPERATING A SPECIFIC ROLE, EVENTUALY COMBINING TOGETHER TO MAKE A UNIFIED SYSTEM. Panel 3: A side shot of the truck reveals the Cobra logo and Russian letters “кобра”. CAPTION: THE WORLD IS A SYSTEM. GOVERNMENTS ARE A SYSTEM. NEIGHBORHOODS ARE A SYSTEM. CAPTION: SCHOOL IS A SYSTEM. SPORTS ARE A SYSTEM. Panel 4: (through the semi windshield) a grizzly, hardened Russian truck driver looks very alarmed. CAPTION: THE HUMAN BODYD IS A SYSTEM MADE UP OF SUB SYSTEMS. CAPTION: THE CHURCH… WELL DON’T EVEN GET MY DAD STARTED ON THE CHURCH. Panel 5: (tight shot) the wheels of the semi lock the brakes are slammed. The tires resist sliding through the snow. CAPTION: THE POINT MY FATHER WAS MAKING WAS THAT YOU DON’T HAVE TO LIKE A SYSTEM AND YOU DON’T HAVE TO AGREE WITH A SYSTEM. CAPTION: BUT THE FASTER YOU LEARN TO LOOK AT THINGS AS A SYSTEM THE FASTER YOU CAN LEARN TO INTERGRATE INTO THE SYSTEM… Panel 6: The semi comes to a stop just inches away from a tree that has been placed across the road. CAPTION: AND… YOU SOON LEARN HOW TO DISMANTLE THE SYSTEM. ------------------------------------------------------- Page 2 (five panels) Panel 1: The truck driver and a cobra guard walk toward the downed tree. The trucker looks angry and the cobra guard has his machine gun ready. CAPTION: COBRA IS A SYSTEM. Panel 2: The trucker and the cobra push the tree from the road. CAPTION: I’VE BEEN GIVEN N ORDER TO TAKE DOWN ONE OF COBRA’S OPERATIONS. Panel 3: We see a soldier, Tripwire, in white camo running from the trees along the road toward the back of the semi. CAPTION: I’VE SENT TRIPWIRE IN FIRST. CAPTION: I STRESSED THE IMPORTANCE OF STEALTH… BUT I CAN ONLY EXPECT SO MUCH FROM AN EXPLOSIVES EXPERT. Panel 4: A side shot of Tripwire reveals that strapped to his back is a metal board with four large wheels, similar to a go cart. CAPTION: AT SOME POINT THINGS ARE GOING TO BLOW UP. Panel 5: Tripwire is underneath the Semi locking himself to the axle. He is lying on his back but off of the road due to the wheels. (Basically this is a ramped up creeper that auto mechanics use). CAPTION: AND WHEN THEY DO THE SYSTEM IS GOING TO KNOW IT’S UNDER ATTACK. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 3 (five panels) Panel 1: The truck moves along as snow sloshes by Tripwire as he is wiring an explosive to the truck’s underbelly. CAPTION: THE JOES ARE ALSO A SYSTEM. A GROUP OF ELEITE MILITARY SPECIALS WIT THE SINGULAR FOUCUS TO END TERRORISM. Panel 2: Tripwire activates the bomb, indicated by a flashing green light. CAPTION: A ROLEX WATCH HAS 187 MOVING PARTS NEEDED TO COMPLET ITS TASK. CAPTION: I LOOK AT MISSION OBJECTIVES THE SAME WAY. Panel 3: Tripwire rolls out from the back of the semi as the truck keeps moving. CAPTION: SEVERAL COGS ARE NEEDED TO SET THINGS IN MOTION. THEY NEED TO WORK AS ONE AND THEY ONLY HAVE A SMALL WINDOW IN TIME TO COMPLETE THEIR END OF THE PLAN. Panel 4: (medium shot) the semi enters a large warehouse. CAPTION: COBRA WILL VIEW THIS AS AN ATTACK. CAPTION: BUT IT’S REALLY JUST A NEEDED DISTRACTION. Panel 5: Tripwire walks towards camera smirking as the entire background is engulfed in a fireball as the warehouse explodes. (very cinematic shot) CAPTION: A BIG, BEATIFUL GLOWING FIREBALL OF A DISTRACTION. ------------------------------------------- Page 4 (five panels) Panel 1: Two Fangs take off from the flat rough of a skyscraper. Snow still blows around in the darkness. CAPTION: TIME FOR THE SECOND COG TO BE SET IN MOTION. Panel 2: LowLight is floating through the air wearing all black with a black chute and gear so that he is coming in stealth. He talks into his fiber-optic bluetooth. LOWLIGHT: WINDMILL, THIS IS LOWLIGHT. TOUCHING IN DOWN IN FIVE, FOUR, THREE, TWO… Panel 3: Lowlight lands on the roof where the Fangs had been. Lowlight disengages his chute. LOWLIGHT: ONE… I’M DOWN AND CLEAR OF CHUTE. Panel 4: Lowlight kneels and pours a tube of a sand-like mixture with one hand and with the other hand he pours a liquid into the sand mixture onto the roof. LOWLIGHT: MIXING CHROMIUM OXIDE AND MAGNISUIM. LOWLIGHT: IN A FEW SECONDS IT WILL REACT AND START TO BURN AT 4,500 DEGREES. Panel 5: Lowlight stands back as the chemicals interact and create Thermite. The chemical reaction transforms into a pillar of white hot flames. LOWLIGHT: MAN, I LOVE THERMITE. VOICE OVER (WINDMILL THROUGH RADIO): THERMO SCANS REGISTER SEVEN BODIES IN THE ROOM BELOW. BE CAREFUL. ------------------------------------------------------ Page 5 (five panels) Panel 1: Close shot of Destro (inside a fancy boardroom) holding up a high-tech pistol and looking at it with a sense of pride. DESTRO: GENTLEMEN, IF I WERE TO ASK YOU TO NAME THE MOST FRUSTRATING THING ABOUT SHOOTING YOUR ENEMY ON THE BATTLEFIELD… DESTRO: MOST OF YOU WOULD ANSWER THAT YOU’RE NEVER GUARANTED A KILL SHOT. Panel 2: (The camera pulls back) Destro stands delivering a speech in front of a group of international business men/terrorists who sit at a long table. DESTRO: WITH BODY ARMOR ADVANCMENTS AND THE EMERGENCE OF HIGH END MOBILE MEDICAL UNITS STUDIES SHOW MOST SOLDIERS ACTUALY SURVIVE BEING SHOT. DESTRO: THAT IS WHY MARS INDUSTRIES HAS SPENT CONSIDERABLE TIME AND CAPITAL INTO OUR R&D. Panel 3 (close shot) Destro dramatically holds a single high-tech bullet as he continues to speak. DESTRO: I PRESENT TO YOU… THE D.I.M.E. DESTRO: DENSE INERT METAL EXPLOSIVE. DESTRO: DIME BULLETS PRODUCE AN UNUSUALLY POWERFUL BLAST SPRAYING A SUPERHEATED “MICRO-SHRAPNEL” OF POWDERED HEAVY METAL TUNGSTEN ALLOY… DESTRO: A GENOTOXIN THAT INSTANTLY ATTACKS THE DNA. Panel 4: A heavily bearded business man from the former Soviet Union carries a mocking expression. INVESTOR: I PAID A MILLION DOLLAR BUY IN TO THIS MEETING FOR YOU TO TRY TO SELL ME A BULLET? ARE YOU SERIOUS? Panel 5: (long panel) Destro shoots the businessman in the chest from across the room. DESTRO: AS A HEART ATTACK. DESTRO: OR SHOULD I SAY AS SERIOUS AS AN EXPLODING BULLET THAT WILL MELT YOUR ORGANS AND THROW IN A SIDE OF TERMINAL CANCER FOR THE FUN OF IT. -------------------------------------------------- Page 6 (five panels) Panel 1: All of the investors jump up and point their various weapons at Destro. INVESTOR 2: INFEDILE! INVESTOR 3: MY MEN WILL STORM THIS BUILDING IF I SEND THE TEXT SIGNAL. INVESTOR 4: HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND, DESTRO? Panel 2: Destro places the pistol on the table, carefree as always. DESTRO: WISE MEN, PLEASE DO NOT MISCONSTRUE MY ACTIONS. DESTRO: I WOULD NEVER EXPECT YOU TO TAKE A SALESMAN’S WORDS FOR IT. I’M CONFIDENT THAT A THOUROUGH LIVE DEMONSTRATION WILL BE MORE PERSAUSIVE. Panel 3: The business man dies on the floor as two surgeons uselessly attend to him. DOCTOR: I HAVE SEEN THOUSANDS OF WOUNDS SINCE MY TIME WITH COBRA, BUT NOTHING LIKE THIS KIND OF DAMAGE. Panel 4: The investors stand over the body in amazement. DOCTOR: WHEN THE SHRAPNEL HIT THE BODY, IT CAUSED VERY STRONG BURNS THAT DESTROYED THE TISSUES AROUND THE BONES… DOCTOR: IT LIQUIFIED INTERNAL ORGANS, LIKE THE LIVER, KIDNEYS, AND THE SPLEEN… IT MAKES SAVING THE WOUNDED ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE. Panel 5: Destro, with his back to the camera, stares out the window looking at the lights of the city. DESTRO: IF ONE IS FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO SURVIVE THE INITIAL IMPACT IT IS OF NO CONCERN… DESTRO: AS THE WOUNDS ARE UNTREATABLE. THE POWDERED TUNGSTEN CANNOT BE REMOVED SURGICALLY. -------------------------------------------------- Page 7 (six panels) Panel 1: Destro turns back to face the investors with his arms out as if he were going to hug them. All salesman…all show. DESTRO: SHALL WE TALK ABOUT THE PRICING MATRIX FOR BULK ORDERS AND THE OPTION COSTS TO BECOME A RESELLER? Panel 2: Two investors jump out of the way as a molten blob of thermite the size of a manhole cover drops from the ceiling to the floor. Fire spews from it in all directions. Panel 3: Lowlight, back on the roof, presses a hand held detonator. LOWLIGHT: IT’S SHOW TIME. I’M GOING DARK. LOWLIGHT: IF I’M NOT OUT IN FOUR MINUTES YOU’LL HAVE TO GO TO PLAN B. AND DUKE HAS A LETTER TO SEND TO MY FAMILY. Panel 4: A large generator on the roof of the building blows up as the c4 is activated. Panel 5: Lowlight drops through the hole in the ceiling into the now dark room. Panel 6: Lowlight shoots two of Destro's guards who were confused in the darkness. ---------------------------------------------------------- Page 8 (five panels) Panel 1: Lowlight slides across the long boardroom table while firing his machine gun. The muzzle blasts are exaggerated in the darkness. Panel 2: Lowlight is on his belly firing his machine gun under the boardroom table. Panel 3: Some investors grab their shins in agony as they have been shot, while others are still in the process of having bullets rip through their legs. Panel 4: Lowlight is placing a jump drive into a laptop that Destro had open on a desk in the room. LOWLIGHT: COME ON. COME ON. GIVE DADDY WHAT HE NEEDS. Panel 5: Lowlight cries out as Destro thrusts a knife into Lowlight’s left ribcage. LOWLIGHT. ARRRRG! DESTRO: I’M REALLY QUITE INSULTED. IF THE JOES ARE IGNORANT ENOUGH TO ATTEMPT TO ASSASSINATE ME I THOUGHT THEY WOULD AT LEAST SEND SOMEONE WITH GRAVATAS… LIKE SNAKE EYES. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Page 9 (six panels) Panel 1: Lowlight throws an elbow backwards catching Destro in the throat. The blow staggers Destro. LOWLIGHT: GET OVER YOURSELF, TIN HEAD. YOU’RE OVERATED. Panel 2: Lowlight shoves his knee into Destro’s side. LOWLIGHT: YOU GET THE POOR MAN’S SNAKE EYES. Panel 3: Destro headbuts Lowlight. The metal blow delivers a painful shot. DESTRO: DON’T BE MEALY-MOUTH WITH ME, BOY. Panel 4: Destro punches Lowlight in his wounded ribs. DESTRO: YOU’RE THE ONE AFRAID TO FIGHT OUT IN THE OPEN. Panel 5: Lowlight side kicks Destro causing Destro to stumble backwards. LOWLIGHT: THAT’S FUNNY COMING FROM A GUY WHO WON’T SHOW HIS FACE. ---------------------------------------------------------- Page 10 (five panels) Panel 1: The force from the kick causes Destro to slam into the boardroom table knocking it on its side. DESTRO: GRENAIDERS! Panel 2: A group of Destro’s security detail flows through the office door with machine guns in hand. CHIEF GRENADIER: DROP YOUR WEAPON AND HANDS TO THE CEILING! Panel 3: Lowlight lobs a grenade over to the group. LOWLIGHT: YOU KNOW IT’S NOT A PARTY UNTIL SOMETHING BLOWS UP. Panel 4: Lowlight kneels behind the overturned table to shield himself from the blast. Panel 5: Lowlight retrieves his jump drive from the laptop in the dark and smoky room. LOWLIGHT: WINDMILL, DID YOU GET THE TRANSMISSION? VOICEOVER: RODGER, THAT. WELL DONE, LOWLIGHT. NOW BECOME A GHOST. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 11 (three panels) Panel 1: Destro in a powerful stance fires the high-tech pistol (the one from page 5) DESTRO: I THINK I CAN ASSIST YOU WITH THAT. SF: BLAM! Panel 2: The shot hits Lowlight in the chest powerfully driving him backward. LOWLIGHT: UNGGGGH! Panel 3: (3/4 splash): Lowlight smashes through the window backward. Firing his machine gun, with one hand, back toward the room and grabbing a repelling rope, already hanging outside the window, with the other. -------------------------------------------------------------- Page 12 (five panels) Panel 1: Destro’s head is pushed back as a bullet ricocheted off of his forehead. It would have been a kill shot if it wasn’t for his metal mask. DESTRO: UNGGHH! Panel 2: Two guards help Destro to his feet. GUARD: SIR, ARE YOU ALL RIGHT? CHIEF GUARD: HE HIT YOU WITH A KILL SHOT? DESTRO: IT WILL TAKE MORE THAN A LUCKY SHOT TO KEEP ME DOWN. Panel 3: Destro stares out the shattered window. A dent can be seen on his mask between his eyes. DESTRO: IT APPEARS THE JOE WASN’T AFTER ME. HE TOOK THE SCEMATICS OF THE TOWN AND MY FACTORIES. Panel 4: On the snowy ground below is repelling rope and a severely damaged Kevlar vest….no sign of Lowlight. DESTRO: THEY WILL SOON REGRET THEIR MISSED OPPORTUNITY. Panel 5: Destro shakes his fist in anger at his guards. DESTRO: ALERT THE AIRFIELD. IF THEY’RE AS BOLD AS I THINK THEY ARE THEY WILL ATTEMPT AN AIRSTRIKE ON THE MAIN MANUFACTURING FACILITY. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 13 (three panels) Panel 1 (3/4 splash) Three Joe XP-14F Sky Striker jets fly over a mountain range as the sun is rising. The lead plane is flown by Windmill. CAPTION: LOWLIGHT SUCEEDED. HE SENT THE DATA TO THE U.S.S. FLAG. AFTER LOOKING OVER THE MAP OF DESTRO’S FACILITIES THE SYSTEM MADE SENCE TO ME. CAPTION: EVERY SYSTEM HAS A WEAK SPOT… IN THIS CASE IT IS THE INCREDIBLE AMOUNT OF ELECTRICITY NEEDED TO RUN ALL OF THE FACTORIES. CAPTION: IF I TAKE OUT THEIR POWER THERE WILL BE A SMALL WINDOW WHERE THE SECOND WAVE CAN STRIKE WITHOUT RESISTANCE. Panel 2: Windmill pushes down on his control column. WINDMILL (TALKS INTI MIC): OKAY BOYS, COBRA’S USING CONTIOUS WAVE RADAR INSTEAD OF PULSE. IT COVERS MORE AREA BUT IT’S BLIND TO ANYTHING UNDER 80 FEET FROM THE GROUND. Panel 3: The jets fly just 20 feet over Russian farm land. The down draft of the jets knocks cows over. WINDMILL: IT LOOKS LIKE WE’RE GOING IN LOW AND SLOW. -------------------- Page 14 (five panels) Panel 1: Cockpit shot of Windmill. WINDMILL: THRUST, I KNOW IT GOES AGAINST YOUR TRAINING BUT DO NOT TRUST YOUR ARTIFICAL HORIZON WHEN GOING THIS LOW AND THIS FAST. WINDMILL: FOLLOW ME, SON. COPY WHAT I DO. Panel 2: A shot of the back of Windmill's jet that is flying low to the ground. Must be able to see the wings. WINDMILL: WATCH MY ALERIONS. NO DRATIC PITCH MOVEMENTS. Panel 3: The three jets ride straight up the angle of a mountain range. WINDMILL: GET YOUR AIM-7S READY. THE AIRPORT SHOULD BE JUST ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THEIS RANGE. WINDMILL: CRUZ, YOU TAKE LEFT. THRUST YOU TAKE RIGHT. I’LL GO DOWN THE MIDDLE. WINDMILL: SEARCH AND DESTROY. Panel 4: The three Sky Strikers fire Aim-7 missiles into cobra Rattlers that are grounded at an air field in the valley of the mountains. Many of the planes explode. CRUZ: SEVEN BIRDS DOWN, BUT IT LOOKS LIKE THREE LEFT THE NEST. WINDMILL: RODGER THAT, CRUZ. CALL OUT IF YOU SPOT THEM. Panel 5: Two cobra soldiers fire rounds from an anti-aircraft gun turret. COBRA SOLDIER 1: LAY DOWN CROSS PATTERN SHOTS. LEAD THEM TO ME. COBRA SOLDIER 2: WE NEED TO CONTAIN THEM FOR ANOTHER THIRTY SECONDS UNTIL THE AIR-VIPERS CAN SWARM IN. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 15 (six panels) Panel 1: Thrust’s jet is hit with several rounds smoke and fire trail from its wing. THRUST: MY WING’S HIT! MY WING’S HIT! Panel 2: Cockpit view of Thrust panicking is a smoke filled cockpit. THRUST: EVERYTHING SEEMS TO BE WORKING, BUT MY GAUGES ARE ALL OVE R THE PLACE. THRUST: TARGETING IS OFF LINE. Panel 3: Cockpit view of Windmill. WINDMILL: NO PROBLEM, THRUST. JUST FOLLOW MY TRACERS. WE HAVE TO TAKE OUT THE TURRETS. WINDMILL: ON MY MARK…F IRE AT WILL. Panel 4: The two Sky Strikers shoot their 20mm cannons and destroy the gun turret on the ground. WINDMILL: NICE. TURRET IS DOWN. ONE MORE FLY BY AND WE’RE OUT. Panel 5: Tight shot of Thrust looking frantic. SFX: BEEEEEP BEEEEP BEEEEP THRUST: I’M LOCKED ON! MY SYSTEM SAYS I’M LOCKED ON! Panel 6: Thrust’s jet explodes as it was struck by a jawbreaker nose cannon blast from a Rattler. THRUST: I DON’T EVEN SEE… FX: BROOOOOOM! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 16 (five panels) Panel 1: A close side shot of Windmill’s Sky Striker. We see Windmill through the glass cockpit. CAPTION: DAMN IT THRUST. YOU SERVED PROUDLY, SON. YOUR FAMILY WILL HEAR ABOUT THAT. INSTRUMENT: BEEEP BEEEEP BEEEEP WINDMILL: YOU THINK YOU’RE GOING TO LOCK ON ME? Panel 2: An opening on the spine of the back of the Sky Striker shoots sparkling chaffs into the air to distract guided missiles. CAPTION: DEPLOYING CHAFFS AND HOPE THAT THE VIPER IS LAZY AND USES HEAT SEEKERS. Panel 3: The cobra missiles explode in mid air as they hit the chaff. CAPTION: IT’S DANGEROUS TO BE PREDICTIBLE WHEN YOU’RE FIGHTER. Panel 4: A Rattler fires the jawbreaker multiple times at Cruz’s jet. The rounds burn brightly through the sky. CRUZ: BOSS, I CAN USE AN ASSIST IF YOU’E OPEN. THE JAWBREAKERS FIRE FASTER THAN I THOUGHT. Panel 5: Cruz’s jet explodes and the Rattler flies through the fireball and wreckage. SFX: BROOOOOM! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 17 (five panels) Panel 1: Side shot a Rattler is right behind Windmill’s jet. CAPTION: I’M NOT GOING TO ENJOY TELLING THEIR FAMILIES THAT THEY WERE LOST. CAPTION: BUT AT LEAST I’LL KNOW THAT I WAS ABLE TO AVENGER THEM. Panel 2: Bursts of fire release from heat sinks over the top of the Sky Striker causing Windmill’s jet is pushed backward and upward, until the Jet is perfectly perpendicular in the air with the nose facing down to earth. CAPTION: I’VE NEVER RELEASED MY TOP HEAT SINKS AT THIS SPEED BEFORE. CAPTION: IT’S EITHER GOING TO PRODUCE THE REVERSE THRUST I NEED OR IT’S GOING TO RIP MY SKY STRIKER APART. Panel 3: Bursts of fire being released from the Sky Striker’s top is equalized by bursts of fire coming from the bottom of the Sky Striker. The thrust caused by both these actions causes Windmill’s jet to stay stationary for thirty seconds. CAPTION: WHEN MY BOTTOM STABILIZERS KICK IN I SHOULD BE SUSPENDED FOR TEN SECONDS OR SO. Panel 4: Windmill fires his two sidewinders downward at the Rattler that is now directly below him. WINDMILL: RAINING DEATH. Panel 5: The rattler explodes and Windmill flies through the debris. SFX: BROOOM! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 18 (six panels) Panel 1: Windmill flies toward a massive city with tall skyscrapers. CAPTION: NO SENSE IN A DUCK HUNT… TWO ON ONE. I NEED SOME COVER. Panel 2: Cool shot of a Rattler chasing the Sky Striker weaving through the skyscrapers. CAPTION: LET’S SEE WHAT KIND OF PILOTS VIPER SCHOOL IS TURNING OUT. Panel 3: Windmill turns sharply to avoid a building, but the Rattler who is firing cannon rounds matches his move. CAPTION: THE DOWN DRAFT IS MURDER. IT’S DIFFICULT TUNNELING THROUGH THESE BUILDINGS. CAPTION: I HAVE TO TIME THIS JUST RIGHT. CATCH HIM BARRING UP. Panel 4: The Sky Striker shoots its two AIM-54 missiles at a tall building. Panel 5: The missiles impact and explode causing several floors of a building to topple over. Panel 6: the Rattler flies right into the falling debris and explodes. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 19 (six panels) Panel 1: Cockpit shot of Windmill as his control panel is on fire. CAPTION: THE HEAT SINK STUNT BEFORE WEAKENED MY INTERNALS AND FIRING THE 54S FRIED MY CONTROL BOARD. CAPTIONS: ALL WEAPONS ARE OFF LINE AND I HAVE ONE MORE ANGRY RATTLER ON MY TAIL. Panel 2: Tighter cockpit shot of Windmill smiling and pulling up on the throttle. CAPTION: MY WIFE TEASES ME BY SAYING WHEN THINGS GET ROUGH, YOU JUST NEED TO FLY HIGHER. CAPTION: I MARRIED A VERY SMART LADY. Panel 3: The Sky Striker is soaring straight up into the air. CAPTION: THRUSTING TO MACH 1. RIBS PUSHING IN. CAPTION HARD TO BREATH. Panel 4: The Rattler is firing at the Sky Striker as they both zip straight through the clouds. CAPTION: HITTING MACH 1.5. FIVE G’S OF PRESSURE. GONNA HAVE BRUSING ON MY BUTT. Panel 5: Tight shot of Windmill grimacing. CAPTION: MACH 2…. SEVEN Gs.. GETTING DISORIENTED. I THINK I’M STILL GOING UP. CAPTION: I’VE GOT TO KEEP PUSHING IT. THINK OF MY TRAINING. Panel 6: Both jets are soaring straight up even higher in the air. CAPTION:… MACH 3… NINE Gs …VISION GONE ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 20 (four panels) Panel 1: Windmill grimacing under tremendous amounts of g-force pressure. The whites of his eyes are now red. CAPTION: RED OUT... BLOOD VESSELS IN MY EYES BURST. CAPTION: .. CIRCULATION… NOT… UP CAPTION: FLYING… TRAINING… Panel 2: Windmills head slumps over as he passes out. Panel 3: The Cobra pilot passes out from the pressure. Panel 4 (3/4 splash): The Sky Striker and the Rattler spin and tumble as they freefall (uncontrolled) towards Earth. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 21 (five panels) Panel 1: Windmill is unconscious as we see the clouds zip past outside the cockpit. Panel 2: The Rattler is spinning closer to the ground. Panel 3: Both jets fall a few hundred feet from the ground. Panel 4: Windmill looks groggy but his eyes open. CAPTION: COME ON ED…. PULL IT TOGETHER. CAPTION: NEED TO LEVEL OUT. HOORAH! Panel 5: The Rattler explodes on impact with the ground but Windmill is able to swoop out of the dive at the last second. CAPTION: APPERENTLY THE VIPERS DON’T TRAIN IN RECOVERY DRILLS LIKE WE DO. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 22 (five panels) Panel 1: Windmill flies over a wooded area. The Sky Striker is on fire and black smoke is trailing behind the jet. CAPTION: ALMOST OUT OF GO-JUICE AND MOVING THE THROTTLE IS LIKE MIXING CEMENT. Panel 2: We see a large concrete damn and a massive lake beneath. (Similar to the Hover Damn.) CAPTION: THE BLUEPRINTS LOWLIGHT SENT US SHOWS THAT THIS DAM PROVIDES ALL OF THE ELECTRICTY FOR THE ENTIRE CITY. CAPTION: TAKE IT DOWN AND THEY WILL BE RIPE FOR THE PICKING. Panel 3: Same shot but closer and we see it through the Sky Striker’s cockpit. The sensors on the windshield are generating all kinds of numbers and stats. And there is a cross hair in the middle of the damn wall. CAPTION: WEAPON SYSTEMS DOWN. BUT I CAN STILL USE MAINFRAME’S DENSITY IMAGING PROGRAM. CAPTION: IT SHOULD SHOW ME THE WEAKEST POINT IN THE STRUCTURE. Panel 4: Windmill ejects out of the cockpit. CAPTION: I HATE TO DO IT, BUT I HAVE NO CHOICE. CAPTION: THE SKY STRIKER IS THE ONLY MISSLE I HAVE LEFT. Panel 5: The Sky Striker slams into the damn wall causing and explosion of fire and water. CAPTION: 38 MILLION IN TAX PAYER DOLLARS. IT’S A SHAME CAPTION: THAT JET IS A TRUE MILITARY HERO. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 23 (five panels) Panel 1: Windmill touches down in the water still strapped to his chair and chute. CAPTION: I HATE WATER. MOST PEOPLE DON’T KNOW THAT’S HOW I GOT MY CALL NAME. CAPTION: I CAN’T REALLY SWIM. I JUST SLAP MY ARMS AOUND IN THE WATER LIKE A WINDMILL. Panel 2: (underwater shot) Windmill in the chair is being tossed around by the current. CAPTION: THE JOE’S YEARLY PSYCH TEST BREAKS YOUR PERONALITY INTO DIFFERENT COLOR CODES. THEY SAID I’M A GREEN. CAPTION: IT MEANS THAT I LIKE TO PLAN EVERY DETAIL OUT. I’M DETAIL ORIENTED. I’M DECISIVE. I HAVE A HUGE EGO. CAPTION: IT MEANS I DON’T SEE THE POINT IN SMALL TALK AND IT PISSES ME OFF WHEN PEOPLE DRIVE SLOW IN THE FAST LANE. Panel 3: (underwater) Windmill uses a knife to cut at the straps of his harness. CAPTION: BEING GREEN CODDED MEANS THAT I HAVE LEADERHIP ABILITY, BUT THEY WORRY… CAPTION: IF THINGS DON’T GO HOW I PLAN THEY WORRY I WILL SHUT DOWN. Panel 4: Windmill surfaces (free of the chair) and gasps for air. CAPTION: THAT’S WHY I HATE THAT TEST. ALL OF THOSE THINGS ARE TRUE, EXCEPT THE PART ABOUT SHUTTING DOWN. Panel 5: A Cobra Piranha boat soars through the water firing at Windmill who is bobbing up and down in the turbulent water. CAPTION: I LOST TWO GOOD MEN UNDER MY COMMAND TODAY… I DITCHED MY JET… I CAN’T BE PART OF THE SECOND WAVE… I ENDED UP IN WATER… CAPTION: AND IT LOOKS LIKE SOME COBRAS ARE COMING TO PUT A BULLET IN MY HEAD. NONE OF THIS WAS ACCORDING TO PLAN. ----------------------------------------------------------- Page 24 (five panels) Panel 1: Bullets pelt the water around Windmill who cries out in pain. CAPTION: BUT INSTEAD OF SHUTTING DOWN. ALL I CAN DO IS THINK ABOUT HOW I CAN PLAN ANOTHER ATTACK AT THE HEART OF COBRA. Panel 2: The Piranha boat stops in the water where windmill had been. Panel 3: The Cobra soldier looks over the edge at the still water. Panel 4: (underwater) WetSuit uses a buddy scuba line to supply air to Windmill as they swim lower into the lake. CAPTION: EVERYTHING IS A SYSTEM. CAPTION: AND EVERY SYSTEM CAN BE DISMANTLED. Panel 5: A Joe S.H.A.R.C. drives toward camera view. Inside we see WetSuit driving Tripwire, LowLight and Windmill to safety. CAPTION: IT MAY TAKE SOME TIME… BUT WE WILL DISMANTLE COBRA. ------- End of issue. |
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