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12-09-2008, 04:56 AM | #1 |
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Alright, here's the first sequence. There are a total of 6 or so parts to the prologue, and they will be added VERY SOON!
Please leave feedback, good or bad (don't be too harsh, I bruise!) I can only get better if I know what does and doesn't work. And please don't mind the crappy camera. UPDATED: Added segment 2 UPDATED: Added segment 3 Last edited by Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja; 12-09-2008 at 09:20 PM.. |
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12-09-2008, 09:06 AM | #2 |
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very cool. I liked the blank stare CC gave the trooper before he said get out.
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12-09-2008, 11:22 AM | #3 |
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12-09-2008, 03:11 PM | #4 |
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PLEASE PEOPLE; if you read the stuff, at least give me your opinion. If it's good or bad, I would really like to know how people are liking what I'm working on.
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12-09-2008, 03:18 PM | #5 |
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i like it. It's clever an a good laugh
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12-09-2008, 03:27 PM | #6 |
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Great stuff man. Keep up the good work.
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12-09-2008, 03:34 PM | #7 |
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Thanks very much for the feedback. I just want to know if it's alright- I have finals and all, but this is something I want to do. I just want to know it's enough to make people chuckle.
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12-09-2008, 03:35 PM | #8 |
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It's pretty good. I laughed.
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12-09-2008, 03:43 PM | #9 |
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Really cool man.
The dialogue was funny and it was much easier to read this time. Nice work.
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