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07-29-2008, 08:08 PM | #31 |
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whack whack whack?
ever shot....anything? and emts? i dont think joe has emts on station probably medivac regardles of location im sure theres a dedicated joe airmed asset. great work, and i mean that as graphic designer myself, pre military, but man...put some military into it. |
07-29-2008, 09:29 PM | #32 |
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Nice photoshop work.
Is it necessary to have the tails of the speech bubbles go right up to their mouths, though? |
07-29-2008, 09:36 PM | #33 |
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I wasn't aware that there were rules to putting in speech bubbles. However I'm happy with, so that's way I'm leaving it....so to answer your question yes.
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07-29-2008, 09:49 PM | #34 |
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OK, that's fine. I just thought the really long tails looked awkward, not something you see in professionally done comics.
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07-29-2008, 09:53 PM | #35 |
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Never claimed to be a professional comic writter. I do it because I enjoy it. Do you do anything like this? If so show us I'd like to see some of your profession comic writting.
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07-29-2008, 10:02 PM | #36 |
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Quote:
whack whack whack?
ever shot....anything? and emts? i dont think joe has emts on station probably medivac regardles of location im sure theres a dedicated joe airmed asset. great work, and i mean that as graphic designer myself, pre military, but man...put some military into it. Yes Second question These are previews and you don't know the whole story because I'm still working on it. Congrats your a graphic designer same here, also former military.....sorry if this isn't military enough for you. On a side note I didn't ask to be critiqued I'm posting what I enjoy doing it |
07-29-2008, 10:02 PM | #37 |
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Ok, here you go:
www.sundang.x-realms.net It's a couple years old, and never got finished because it became too much like work, and I too was doing it just because I enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more from you. |
07-29-2008, 10:13 PM | #38 |
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Ok, here you go:
www.sundang.x-realms.net It's a couple years old, and never got finished because it became too much like work, and I too was doing it just because I enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more from you. |
07-29-2008, 10:16 PM | #39 |
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Cool, thanks!
(prolly the only one to look at it in a year, btw ;D ) |
07-29-2008, 11:52 PM | #40 |
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The more I sit here and think about the more pissed I get so I'm going to say it. I think it takes a lot of ball for both Sonny Crockett and Viper6 to ridicule the photos I've posted in this tread. I'm all for everyone having an opinion, but this IMHO was nothing more than poking fun at my expense. If you feel the need to say hey this sucks then have the balls to say what or where I can improve.
However given the fact that (if you two read the title) it CLEARLY STATES "A little preview" which means it's not done. So you don't know is what the story is about, or who's in it or how it's even going to end. Also the pages that are posted are not what's going to be in the final version, you all saw a different version that I edited because I wanted it to be a surprise when posted. So Viper6 thanks for slamming the little preview you saw, sorry it's not up to your standards. Sonny Crockett sorry if the speech bubbles are too close to the mouth, I guess it's not up to your standards either. My opinion if you two have found these flaws then when it's finished don't bother reading it. Last edited by Blowtorch; 07-30-2008 at 12:02 AM.. |
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