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05-12-2009, 05:05 PM | #1 |
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GI Joe Operatives Snake Eyes, Leatherneck and Lt. Stone have been sent on a mission to recover a stolen GI Joe Aircraft: Vector. The Jet was hijacked en route to a storage facility, as this aircraft is decommissioned. Hijackers are none to be associated with cobra and are highly armed and dangerous. Last seen in abandoned Arbco facility. The complex is a semi-fortified Cobra chop shop. Number of enemies unconfirmed.
Ok Snake, you know the drill, lets try to take em all out before the even notice us. So silent weapons unless we have to resort to the big guns. Leatherneck, thats what your for. your gonna go get into position and await my orders. Lets go. inside.... Stone, im in position... |
05-12-2009, 05:06 PM | #2 |
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huh, that was easy Snake, lets neutralize that B.A.T. Drone and get this bird back to HQ. OH SH*T we got another live one! Snake! Stone: You ok buddy? SE: .............. Last edited by skatezaz; 05-12-2009 at 05:10 PM.. |
05-12-2009, 05:07 PM | #3 |
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Leatherneck, Snake's hit bring in the 'nades!
Roger! Direct hit, now lets get that B.A.T. before he escapes in the Vector's Pod! All enemies Neutralized, lets take care of SE and get the hell out of here. Last edited by skatezaz; 05-12-2009 at 05:14 PM.. |
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05-12-2009, 05:29 PM | #5 |
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Snake Eyes, fully recovered from a gunshot to the left ankle, mostly a flesh wound. and a broken wrist and collerbone from impact of falling. His ego was bruised, and he is doubting if he still has "it."
Later, during mission de-briefing, Stone suggests to Hawk, that they should have just let Cobra keep the jet since they know all the flaws and weaknesses of the decommissioned aircraft...Hawk: That was my plan the whole time, but we couldnt just let em have it for free! this is my first attempt at a dio/story so i know its a little rough as i didnt have time to add all the little effects i wanted to. but any feedback would be appreciated. thanks for looking Last edited by skatezaz; 05-12-2009 at 06:09 PM.. |
05-12-2009, 06:38 PM | #6 |
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Looks awesome lol. Great job.
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05-12-2009, 06:41 PM | #7 |
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very cool, i enoyed it.
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05-12-2009, 06:43 PM | #8 |
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Nice story and set-up. Good job.
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05-12-2009, 06:44 PM | #9 |
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Well orchestrated. I love the effects you included.
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05-13-2009, 06:52 AM | #10 |
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cool fun dio.i like it.
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