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04-05-2009, 02:53 AM | #1 |
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Bellow is my entry into the Custom Vile Villain Contest. I hope you all enjoy. I had a great time making this.
So with out further ado I present The origin of “EX-104” Who am I? I do not know. I only know I was once gentle, I was once kind, I was once human, I was once but never more… 5 years ago: It was a cloudless night; the wind blew gently across the leaves bringing a sweet smell of apple blossoms with each gust. Out in the distance a dog could be heard yelping out a cry that only the dark alleys could amplify into something more. The evening was calm and that was how Officer Thomas liked it. The sound of his perfectly shinned shoes hitting the broken concrete sidewalk was his friend, he heard it each night he walked on patrol. Thomas was a beat cop and this little dirty part of town was his to patrol. Each night he kissed his wife goodnight and each night with his scratched coffee thermos in hand he faithfully performed his job. Nothing ever happened in this part of town and that too was just how Thomas liked it. He was only 35 but he never grew tired of thinking about his retirement. He would move south away from the city, buy a farm and grow apple trees and honey bees, it was a great dream and it kept him safe. A cop needs such dreams to get them by, to make them feel safe in a very freighting world. A voice rang out in the distance shattering the calm and peace of the gentle night. The voice ripped the curtain of safety away from Thomas filling him with a fear that he had never known. The scream was shrill and terrifying, it was the sound you hear in your nightmares only this was no dream and the sound was all too real. Thomas forgot about his safety and his dreams of retirement as he ran. His hard soles of his shoes smacking the ground with a force they had never known. The sound grew silent and the air became stale and cold. Thomas saw a shadow of a man holding what looked to be a young woman in his grasp, fingers locked securely around her throat. In the darkness where only our self and the demons that haunt us roam, Thomas stood still his heart beating a constant drum pounding as he began to pull his side arm. The wind was gone and the moonless night gave no light. Thomas yelled out with a fierce voice he had never uttered before “DROP HER”! Thomas felt something hit him, slicing into his face like a hot splinter ripping flesh and bone pushing deep into his left cheek through his tongue and down the front of his neck. Thomas fell to the ground, the knife jutting out of his skull, blood dripping down from his mouth. He tried to stand but the force of the blow from the knife crippled him as he realized he could no longer see out of his left eye. A cool breeze blew once more and the smell of the cherry blossoms once more filled the air. Thomas laid on the ground motionless his face erupting in a hot fiery pain. He looked up and saw two men standing over him. “What do we do with him Doctor?” a deep roughneck voice asked. Thomas felt another sharp pain in his thigh this time; a needle had been stabbed into it. Wrap him up boys we got a new toy for us to experiment with. As Thomas began to close his one remaining weary eye for the last time he thought he could make out on the Doctors face a single gleaming monocle and with that he passed out. Who am I? I do not know. I only know I was once gentle, I was once kind, I was once human, I was once but never more… Claim to Fame: Dr Mindbender had a plan; he wanted to build an army of soldiers that where superhuman strong, felt no pain, had the constitution of a serial killer and had no regard for the law. Yes, sure he had created the BATS and they had all the qualities he was looking for but they couldn’t think and they couldn’t reason. BATS, with all their fire power, where simply dumb mindless killing machines. So by the dark of night he and the Dreadnoks would search the streets looking for humans to use as guinea pigs in his grand scheme. He found one hundred and three people, over time, who he experimented on; each better than the last but it was experiment number one hundred and four who proved the greatest. He had strength, intelligence, speed and thanks to the process of genetic manipulation Mindbender used, was very smart. Mindbender had done it, he finally succeeded in creating a super soldier better than Serpentor and that pleased him. Mindbender was always a little jaded over the botch job on that so called leader. On the eve of unveiling his new super soldier to Cobra Commander, something went wrong. Experiment one hundred and four broke free of his bonds and true to his creators plan was able to reason and understand. He killed all of the one hundred and three other experiments and then destroyed the lab by setting it on fire, thus destroying all the notes needed to rebuild the experiment. Experiment one hundred and four didn’t want there to ever be any one like him created again. Mindbender was furious, so much so that he sent a company of BATS armed with heavy weapons to retrieve his creation. They never returned. Well to this day he has never recaptured his super soldier. His Creation now goes by the name EX-104 and every year on Mindbenders Birthday he gets a nice pink ribbon and bunny paper wrapped package in the mail and inside that package sits a Cobra Eels severed head. Stapled to each head is a card saying “Hope you are having fun, see you real soon. Love your Son EX-104. (Life must be grand when you have your own serial killer looking after you)
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04-05-2009, 03:02 AM | #2 |
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Love the description
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04-05-2009, 03:03 AM | #3 |
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Thanks, that is the rules for the contest. Make up a back story and a rise to fame story too. I had a blast making this figure.
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04-05-2009, 03:08 AM | #4 |
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Awesome story! That really sells the figure. Nice work on this one Samantha! The Eel head sent to Mindbender is a beautiful twist.
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04-05-2009, 03:10 AM | #5 |
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Thank you. I am not a great writer but I tried. Thanks again.
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04-05-2009, 03:25 AM | #6 |
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Nice work... did you watch a bunch of horror/slasher films to get into the mindset?
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04-05-2009, 03:28 AM | #7 |
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Actually I spent a major part of my youth watching Horror. I figured that the most horrifying childhood thoughts where of Serial Killer, Edger Cassy scarea the heck out of me.
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04-05-2009, 03:40 AM | #8 |
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Yeah right , that was frickin' awesome. The back story rules and the figure is just...Wow !
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04-05-2009, 07:46 AM | #9 |
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Nice figure--love the back story. Very creative.
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04-05-2009, 09:03 AM | #10 |
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Thank you very much. I am just as excited to see all the other original entries.
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