Any feedback would be appreciated Bro, thanx .
I hope you've enjoyed where I've taken the story thus far; if so, I think you'll REALLY enjoy where I take it next...
thanks for the bump bro, wish more tankers would give our work a look, not enough support in the writers circle...given there are some rough bits of fanfic out there which turn people off; maybe title lines should have fan ratings which would draw readership? your sleeping sword is bomb bro
and while crimson cloth is comming nicely, gaining momentum, im not feeling any support outside our circle. im curious about your thoughts on it thus far... hit me back, PM me, or post a little something something of substance, thanks.
see, i assume she maintains some quarters at whatever main base they are at, or most large bases.
can you revise it to where she is rudely interrupted and given the evac order and now on the plane? thatd make sense.
im not mad or flipn out,lol.... i enjoy working with you, its just frustrating, and no charcater is mine, not at all, please write with any of them it just has to fit and ill try better to to explain any questionable scenes.