some joe sequentials

[barnabas13]

im working on some new sequential pages for my portfolio.a few of them will be gi joe ones.ill post all the sequentials in this thread.heres one just finished and wanted to share.from start to finish.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h60/frankenstin/howard/yojoepencilsandlines-2.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h60/frankenstin/howard/roadblockpage.jpg

[tile_mcgillus]

Yeah. Thats pure unadulterated awesomeness. My only gripe would be some hints at a background.

I want to see the next page that will be just full of destruction... :)

[Shin Densetsu]

The flow from panel to panel is great. I'm not sure what you are trying to accomplish with the blur and in the last panel, it would be better if Roadblock looked more aggressive, a more intense facial expression would work. Right now his face has a disgusted expression, as if he saw something disturbing on the ground. Also, the flashes look out of place on the last panel, they don't fit in with your style. A blast effect similar to a gun burst would work better, rather than a spark. Other than that, keep them coming!

[Vagabond Elf]

I dunno, the flashes give the impression of traverse which a single muzzle-blast wouldn't. & I'm pretty sure the motion blur is meant to reinforce that swing; Roadblock is just hosing down the area.

[K.B.]

amazing work my man i cant wait to see more!

[JoeFanPDX]

Your art is incredible. I do agree that the background is lacking but that is minor. I would watch if this turned animated for sure.

[xFlintx]

As usual Your art makes me smile. Nice stuff.