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Von Blitzkrieg
05-06-2009, 12:58 AM
KRAK-KRAK-KRAK! Three .45 GAP rounds, they robbed Serpentor
of life; a incendiary grenade burned Serpentor's remains to ashes. Cobra no longer had an emperor.

Cobra Commander holstered his Glock 37. "Effectively immediately, I am resuming control of COBRA." Thousands of regular COBRA
infantrymen surrounded the Crimson Guardsmen. Said Cobra infantry were reinforced, with both HISS tanks and FANG gyrocopters.

The CGs surrendered without a fight, they were marched to
waiting transports; "If you ever send troops anywhere near a COBRA operation, I will nuke Extensive Enterprises!" radioed Cobra Commander.

Xamot and Tomax turned to other criminal activities, their days with
COBRA were ended. Already, CGs were being dumped at the towers.
"Major Bludd, are you in position aboard our stealth bomber?" "Right-o, Commander." "Nuke them."

For the first time since Nagasaki, an atomic warhead was detonated above a city; no one could imagine what would happen
next. The exploding H-Bomb reacted with an experimental laser reactor located in in building's basement, sending a pulse....

The stealth bomber landed at the Cobra airstrip. Major Bludd dismounted the plane. "Gunfire, and our lads are shooting back."
The rattle of AK47s was answered by the cracks of slower-firing weapons.

"Bolt action rifles?! What army in the 21st Century doesn't use assault rifles?!" Major Bludd mused aloud. "BANZAI!" SWISH! CLANG!
Major just ducked in time to avoid the swing of a
WWII Japanese officer's katana sword!

Major Bludd clawed for gun leather, the officer charged again. KRAK!
the officer toppled,shot through the side; a member of the COBRA Youth Corps, AK47 smoking. "Come on, we must get to the heavy weapons depot!"

The boy had sense to set the AK47 to semiautomatic fire, a high
capacity semiauto is actually more combat effective than wildly spraying bullets. Cobra infantry and Cobra Youth were steadily being pushed back.

The boy noticed a Python cycle. He jumped aboard it. "Get on!" Major Bludd obeyed. Bullets and grenades flew about them, they roared towards a HISS Tank column; COBRA infantry were frantically organizing a defense. A Stinger rolled up to Major Bludd.
"Sir, Orders from Temple Charlie; we are to retreat there and plan a counter attack." Major Bludd dismounted.

The boy on the Python cycle roared towards Temple Charlie, Major Bludd climbed aboard the vehicle and joined the retreat. What happened next was luck.

Japanese WWII soldiers surrounded an abandoned COBRA munitions truck. A Japanese officer examined its cargo. Crates of AK47s, magazines,and ammunition. He
personally rode with said truck back to the landing site.

A radio message was dispatched to the High Command. Several hours later, A Betty bomber landed at an improvised air strip.
Twenty Zeros escorted it back to Japan.

Within
90 days, Japan would be mass producing the AK47 assault
rifle for its forces.

NSA
05-06-2009, 01:08 AM
Interesting :)

Von Blitzkrieg
05-06-2009, 09:13 AM
Nazi Germany.... A Cobra transport plane landed at Bad Tolz. Heinrich Himmler and a small army of SS men , they greeted them at the airfield.

Himmler was intrigued, as Cobra Youth Corps members began unloading crates of supplies. "What weapons do you bring, that will help Germany win the war?" inquired Himmler.

Destro handed an AK47 to the SS high commander. "Most impressive." Himmler said. "Wittmann?" "Ja, Herr kommandant?" "I want the radio operator, whom negotiated our alliance with COBRA;
he is to be promoted to Sturmfuhrer at once."

"Jawohl, mein commandant; Heil Hitler!" Wittmann obeyed. "If these weapons help us, MARS and COBRA will become official arms suppliers to the Reich."

****MARS=Military Armaments Resarch Systems; Destro's outfit which arms COBRA****

The Pitt.... "I can't believe this." Gung-Ho said, as he nervously
clutched an M14A2 rifle. "Believe it, man." Footloose replied. "COBRA's nuke sent us back to World War II."

"Ten Hut!" Sgt. Duke Hauser called the Joes to attention. "AS of now, we are still in the U.S. armed forces. Whether or not President Palin is our commander, we will obey our lawful superiors; our active duty oath is still in effect."

"Most assuredly!" Colonel Sharp boomed. "All satellites, TV, and FM radio are down; Only AM transmission remains." He paused. "At 0830, an AWACs plane was sent airborne, its radio transmissions
will soon be sending us data."

"Because your families may be in danger from this event, I'm only deploying two F16s to guard the AWACS plane. The rest of you, get your families and bring them here; take whatever you need."

"YO, JOE!" they scrambled to various vehicles and left.

Troynos
05-06-2009, 09:45 AM
Interesting concept, but I'm confused at who's who in the first chapter and second chapter and what exactly is happening.

So CC forces the Twins and CGs out and sends Major Bludd after them? But then who is Bludd fighting towards the end of Chapter one.

What city was the nuke dropped on?

Germany has gone back towards being a Nazi state? Or is it a group in Germany?

The concept is interesting, but it's just a tad confusing what's going on.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-06-2009, 01:01 PM
Interesting concept, but I'm confused at who's who in the first chapter and second chapter and what exactly is happening.

So CC forces the Twins and CGs out and sends Major Bludd after them? But then who is Bludd fighting towards the end of Chapter one.

What city was the nuke dropped on?

Germany has gone back towards being a Nazi state? Or is it a group in Germany?

The concept is interesting, but it's just a tad confusing what's going on.

The H-bomb destroyed EE reacted with an experimental laser power reactor, blowing the Joes back to World War II.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-07-2009, 09:42 PM
A Fortress in Nazi Germany....
"ACHTUNG!" The Waffen SS men came to attention, as their new commanding officer entered the main compound. He was most impressive, indeed.

He was 6 foot-9 inches tall, solid, lean muscle. Clean Shaven, Blonde Flat top; Blue eyes. General Panzer von Blitzkrieg wore the combat camouflage of the Waffen SS, topped by an M40 cap.

He carried a Beretta M1938 submachinegun, two Mauser 714 semiautomatic pistols; each pistol had a 20 shot magazine and said pistols were belted around his waist. Two .'Potato Masher'. grenades were thrust into the pistol belt's belt.

A Viking-pattern long sword, it was slung in a scabbard across his back; it was documented that he killed 20 Soviet soldiers with said sword, when they tried a bayonet charge on his position in Russia. Von Blitzkrieg's eyes surveyed his enemy.

"Mein Kameraden, I have studied COBRA intelligence reports; our real enemy must be our American counterpart. DEATH TO G.I. JOE!"
"DEATH TO G.I. JOE! HEIL HITLER!" They chorused.

Of all things, trucks with COBRA insignia entered the fortress; members of the COBRA Youth Corps began unloading crates in front
of the Waffen SS men. "This is the AK47 assault rifle, you men whom are still armed with bolt actions; come forth!" Each man exchanged his Mauser for an AK47, along with a tactical vest filled with
extra loaded magazine pouches.

Every man whom did not have an AK47, they toted an MP34 submachinegun; a unit was fast forming that could challenge G.I. Joe. "COBRA YOUTH, ATTENTION!" They fell in and lined up, their speed pleased Genneral Von Blitzkrieg.

Group Leader Miller said. "Each of you, take five SS men and teach them the usage of the AK47!" Soon knots of people were learning the AK47.

.'And so dawns the destruction of G.I. Joe.' thought Von Blitzkrieg, as he surveyed the activity.

cobrabat
05-07-2009, 09:54 PM
Very interesting I like it though

Irid70
05-07-2009, 09:55 PM
This isn't at all creepy.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-08-2009, 06:42 PM
The Pitt... "Colonel Sharp, this is AWACs 50. Be advised that some satellites are operational.' ."Roger, AWACs 50; continue monitoring for as long as your fuel supplies allows." "Yes, sir."

But, Joes and Cobras were not the only ones hurled into WWII. The youth sat in his trailer, he would strike a blow against America's foes. His fingers flashed on the keyboard.

.'Entrance code accepted'. the screen read. Buttons flashed again. .Targeting per your data, launch authorized at your discretion.'

In a Turkish forest, a bunker revealed itself. Four atomic missiles lept towards the heavens. Thirty minutes later, Tokyo, Kyoto, Osaka, and Ise in Japan had ceased to exist.

*Ise: the most sacred spot in the Shinto religion*

Japan learned that some Americans believe that mass genocide is a civic duty.

Japan. Admiral Yamamoto toured the burning remnants of Tokyo, Adjutant Namura briefed him.

"The entire Royal Family is gone, all our holy Shinto sites are destroyed. Every hospital bed in Japan filled with the dying and wounded."

15 million dead, 25 million wounded. "Japan lives without the Emperor." Yamamoto began. "Our war has become that of Europe, Japan must endure to survive."

Numerous Japanese military officials and politicians, they met with Admiral Yamamoto. "We must further align ourselves witrh Germany and Italy."

Another adjutant briefed Yamamoto. "Sir, the AK47 rifle factories were not hurt in the blast; combat reports from China indicate that we now have the world's most effective rifle."

The youth in the trailer park carefully ceased operations, AM radio newscasts confirmed his success; he would strike again only when forgotten...

COBRA ISLAND.... "Commander, .'NUC FLASH'. alert!' "Continue technician." Cobra Commander said. "Are all our
own nukes accounted for?" "Sir, the reports indicate they are all secured."

"Excellent." Cobra Commander faced Destro. "Destro, do your forces have nukes?" "No, Commander; we are as suprised as you are."

New Guinea... HISS Tanks took up positions, FANGS and FIREBATS filled the air. Cobra infantry and Cobra Youth, they
began an offensive against the Japanese...

Irid70
05-08-2009, 07:47 PM
Mass genocide as a civic duty? WTF?

Von Blitzkrieg
05-08-2009, 09:09 PM
Mass genocide as a civic duty? WTF?


Actually, I got the idea from .'War Games'(1982).

Irid70
05-08-2009, 09:17 PM
Actually, I got the idea from .'War Games'(1982).


But nobody in that movie thought genocide was a civic duty. The kid thought he was playing a game, not killing millions. That was the point. He was horrified by the idea. I mean...that movie is as anti-genocide, as anti-nuclear weapons as it gets...I do NOT see how that can be an influence other than, yes, a kid hacked a computer that controlled nukes.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-08-2009, 10:25 PM
Consider, are we that much more moral than the bombers of Nagasaki and Dresden? I hope to show that Japan might have invaded America after such an attack.

sonofdestro
05-08-2009, 10:55 PM
Consider, are we that much more moral than the bombers of Nagasaki and Dresden? I hope to show that Japan might have invaded America after such an attack.

Hey Von there is no need for you to have to debate morality as a result of someones criticism. A story where characters from a toy line time travel to the past is obviously a work of pure science fiction/fantasy. You can make these fictional characters do whatever you want them to, you are the author. I am enjoying the whole Manhattan Project meets GI Joe thing you got going on here. I also like me some genocide in my fiction, so get as genocidal as you want. Keep up the good work I would love to read more.

Troynos
05-08-2009, 11:43 PM
Wow.. that's all I can say... I have no idea what is going on.

How the heck did the Joes find out they were transported back to WW2? There's satellites back in WW2? How did the Germans find out about G.I.Joe. Where'd the Cobra Youth Movement come from?

Who bombed the Japanese cities?

I'm confused.

And I'm sorry, but that "genocide as civic duty" line.. yeah, that ruins the rest of the story right there. Talk about sending the wrong message...


The basic idea, of Joe & Cobra being sent back in time, that's not a bad concept. But it's not carrying through. I have no idea what is going on. It's all happening too fast.

I mean in Chapter 1, Hawk is telling the Joes to get their families. How is that possible when the Joes are back in time?

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 12:06 AM
Hey Von there is no need for you to have to debate morality as a result of someones criticism. A story where characters from a toy line time travel to the past is obviously a work of pure science fiction/fantasy. You can make these fictional characters do whatever you want them to, you are the author. I am enjoying the whole Manhattan Project meets GI Joe thing you got going on here. I also like me some genocide in my fiction, so get as genocidal as you want. Keep up the good work I would love to read more.


OK. Considering that .'Resolute's'. opening episode killed 10 million people in the Moscow raid, I didn't feel that my violence too over the top.

BTW, Cute kid, is it your?

Troynos
05-09-2009, 12:12 AM
OK. Considering that .'Resolute's'. opening episode killed 10 million people in the Moscow raid, I didn't feel that my violence too over the top.


It's not the violence, it's the underlying tone to it. The "genocide as a civic duty" part.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 12:35 AM
Washington, D.C. President Franklin Delano Roosevelt interacted when General George C. Marshall. "Mr. President, the destruction of the four Japanese cities; it has not ended the resolve of the Japanese to fight."

"How were the cities destroyed?" "Dr. Einstein is convinced that atomic weapons delivered by guided, long range rockets is the most plausible explanation."

"How fares our our own atomic weapons project?" "Years in the future, Mr. President." "Would mass bombing raids, using a combination of nerve gas and incendiaries; would said raids be ready to go?"

"Already in production, Mr. President." General Marshal was dismissed, he began drawing up contingency plans.

The Aleutians. Japanese soldiers were evacuated to ships, said ships began moving down the West Coast of North America. The Japanese admiral
was aghast at the fleet which
greeted him. "This will be the biggest attack since Hitler attacked Russia!"
4 air craft carriers, three battle ships, fifty transports, and Lord knows how many
other vessels were asembled.

"To avenge our Emperor, we will invade Los Angeles. BANZAI!" The admiral yelled, after reading the message from Imperial Navy HQ.
The men cheered, too.


The Mid-Pacific. "Herr Kapitan, the following Enigma
message was recieved." "Danke." The U-boat captain read it. "All German and Italian forces, East of South Africa to the West Coast of South America; you are to aid Japanese in their attack on America."

The die was rapidly being cast.

Irid70
05-09-2009, 12:40 AM
OK. Considering that .'Resolute's'. opening episode killed 10 million people in the Moscow raid, I didn't feel that my violence too over the top.

BTW, Cute kid, is it your?

It is not the violence itself but the tone. Cobra Commander dusted Moscow in that because he wanted to rule the world, he wanted power, he wanted the world to fear him. He did it, in short, because that established him as the bad guy. The un-redeemable bad guy.

This kid is doing it because he believes "it is his civic duty." Does that make him an un-redeemable bad guy? No, that suggests that the tone of this piece is one that condones genocide in some form.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 08:14 AM
I will eventually introduce him as the American variant of a white supremacist. Think Bush combined with the Japanese WWII mentality of .'punish the white man for being white'.

It is historically documented that Japan killed more innocent people than the Holocaust, its
that because of emerging Cold War; Japan got more lenient treatment than the Nazis. We needed Japan for bases within the range of the Asian mainland.

The kid's motivation, it is due to the perception among Americans that their military is weak and helpless; a consequence of the Vietnam War/Iranian hostage crisis syndrome(s). As you can see, I'm a history nut.

sonofdestro
05-09-2009, 08:42 AM
OK. Considering that .'Resolute's'. opening episode killed 10 million people in the Moscow raid, I didn't feel that my violence too over the top.

BTW, Cute kid, is it your?

Thanks, yeah he is mine.

I have no problem with the thermonuclear strike being initiated by a teenage boy in a trailer park. It is a fictional story it is supposed to be far fetched and stir up the readers emotions. The emotions being positive or negative is not the authors concern , that is purely the readers interpretation. The trailer park kids actions or the reasoning behind them should not be criticized yet anyway. Perhaps this is establishing him as a secondary villain the Joes will have to deal with.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 08:49 AM
Thanks, yeah he is mine.

I have no problem with the thermonuclear strike being initiated by a teenage boy in a trailer park. It is a fictional story it is supposed to be far fetched and stir up the readers emotions. The emotions being positive or negative is not the authors concern , that is purely the readers interpretation. The trailer park kids actions or the reasoning behind them should not be criticized yet anyway. Perhaps this is establishing him as a secondary villain the Joes will have to deal with.

Thanks for the input!

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 04:54 PM
Japan... The smoldering ruins of the Arishikage ninja clan(s) compound confronted little Thomas Arishikage. He had been playing
in the woods, fallen embers from the atomic attack; said embers had burned down the compound, no survivors.

Thomas cried. then he solemnly began walking to get help. He eventually came to Osaka. He saw members of the Hitler Youth, they were helping wounded Japanese civilians into ambulances and other emergency vehicles.


He meet their group leader. "We were visiting Japan on a goodwill mission, when these attacks came." "I wish to enlist in your outfit."
And so it was, the future Storm Shadow became a citizen of Nazi Germany.

The Mid Pacific. U-321 was stationed near Midway. "Enemy aircraft
carriers,sighted, .'Silent Battle Stations'. drill." ordered the Nazi commander; as he peered through the periscope.

"Torpedos Los!" Two G7e torpedoes raced from the U-boat, KABOOM! The U.S.S. Wasp's ammunition bunker exploded. Already, she began sinking as sailors began dropping life rafts.

"Tubes three and four, fire!" Two more torpedoes slammed into the Lexington, they started a major fire in her fuel tanks.

The last two torpedoes left the Enterprise dead in the water. Silently, the U-boat slithered away; as multiple destroyers belatedly covered the stricken vessels.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-09-2009, 05:45 PM
The Mid Pacific. U-321 was stationed near Midway. "Enemy aircraft
carriers,sighted, .'Silent Battle Stations'. drill." ordered the Nazi commander; as he peered through the periscope.

"Torpedos Los!" Two G7e torpedoes raced from the U-boat, KABOOM! The U.S.S. Wasp's ammunition bunker exploded. Already, she began sinking as sailors began dropping life rafts.

"Tubes three and four, fire!" Two more torpedoes slammed into the Lexington, they started a major fire in her fuel tanks.

The last two torpedoes left the Enterprise dead in the water. Silently, the U-boat slithered away; as multiple destroyers belatedly covered the stricken vessels.

Little did they know, that the U.S.S. Flagg was sending help.

Captain STEVEN DePACE
05-09-2009, 05:47 PM
Man why are your chapters like 3 paragraphs long?

Von Blitzkrieg
05-10-2009, 12:46 PM
Admiral Beverly Duffield read the reports from the Predator aerial drone. "Men, three American carriers are in trouble. Communications, radio them that we are sending help; Disaster teams to choppers, medical, ASR; and firefighting."

The U.S.S. Flagg spun into action. Aboard the Enterprise, Admiral Bull Halsey watched grimly; as the WASP was now fully upside down. An Adjutant ran up to him. "Sir, radio room just got a transmission from an outfit called .'G.I. Joe'. They are sending us help."

"All crews to AA stations, all fighters airborne; donot attack unless inbound bogies are themselves attacking." Frantic activity gripped the flight deck.

Moments later, Sea Stallion Helicopters began dropping rescue swimmers and life rafts; soon thousands of American sailors were aboard the Enterprise. The most desperately hurt were life-flighted to the Flagg.

An hour later. ""Sir, the Fires aboard the Lexington are out; our guys say the fire foam from the Flag's firemen were instrumental in saving her." AdmiraL Halsey was very glad. Although the WASP was now sunk, over 2,500 American lives were saved.

A helicopter landed on the flight deck, Admiral Duffield stepped out. ."Admiral Halsey, We are first and foremost Americans; we are here to protect our country." "Agreed." They then began briefing
one another.

Scarlett Sakura
05-11-2009, 11:19 PM
kind of confused on how strom shadows a kid hmm intersting

Von Blitzkrieg
05-12-2009, 02:27 PM
Glad to have you here! In canon, Storm Shadow born during WWII. For this fan fic, he was born in 1934; which would make him eight years old(1942).

General Panzer Von Blitzkrieg, he is my orginal creation; think of him as a cross between Captain America and Snake Eyes. I want him to be a recurring foe for G.I. Joe, thus he will not be killed. I'm thinking him as a foe for Snake Eyes.

Are you in the Army? If so, what do you do? I'm a former KVCT(Kanawha Valley Communications Team)member. Secretary, radio operator, and third C-I-C. I am a survivalist and gun nut who loves the Lord Jesus and whom like dogs and cats, heavy metal rock, violent videogames, and Godzilla(among other tastes).

Ok. Let's hear about you.

I am now eliminating Storm Shadow feom this time. I want a different enemy for Snake Eyes.

kneroh
05-12-2009, 02:50 PM
The story seems to move and jump at odd places. I'm not trying to be cruel but in its current form it doesn't make sense.

First, you really should do a better job at proof reading. There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors.

Second, I would suggest you get a second set of eyes to read before you post. The story is in your head and you are familiar with it and you know what is happening, now see if a friend or family feels the same way.

Just my 2 cents.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-19-2009, 03:23 PM
New Guinea. Supoported from the air FANG copters, HISS tanks, Stingers, and Python Cycles; they began their push towards the Japanese airstrip. They arrived, as the last Betty bomber faded into the distance.

Both COBRA Infantry and COBRA youth corps,they search the abandoned positon. "Major Bludd, they've left!" A youth corps member said. Incredibly, tons of Japanese small arms and ammunition were abandoned.

Type 96 machineguns were prized, they were given to the Cobra Youth Corps; as were the boxes of Italian submachineguns. One youth made an exceptional haul.

Fred Barco faced The Baroness. He had two Mauser pistols, a Beretta 1938 submachinegun; he even had acquired a magnificent katana.

The katana Fred had was wrapped in gold and purple silk, it was very beautiful; he now faced the Baroness. He knelt facing her, and offered the katana to her. "Rise, Cobra Youth; You will offer this sword in tribute to Cobra Commander personally. You'll get a medal for this!"


The Arisaka rifles and
like weapons, they were abandoned with the airstrip. The Baroness was given a message by a COBRA soldier . ."Evacuate Temple Charlie, You are being returned to our Main base ASAP."

Within hours, they were all aboard COBRA planes, they were transported to COBRA Island. Some of the Joes, meanwhile; they
found their families.

Von Blitzkrieg
05-21-2009, 01:00 PM
Footloose approached the .'Shady Flats Trailer Park'; Gungho was with him, too. Numerous dwellers were patrolling their zone, they were armed with shotguns, bolt action rifles, Winchesters, semiauto hunting rifles; more than a few were toting FALs, Mini14s, AK47s and M1 carbines,too. The .'assault weapon'. fad had visited them, too.

The dweller(s) sidearms were either double-action revolvers, or semiautomatic pistols. .357 magnum, .44 special, 9mm Luger, .45 acp, and .45 GAP; they were their choice of calibers. Glocks, Rugers, Tauri, XDs, and 1911A1s; they were the handguns present.

A local pastor had been decreed their leader, Footloose noticed the man's smile; he immediately relaxed. Pastor Leon F. Kilroy often went boogie-boarding with him. "Where's Bobby?" Footloose asked, for Bobby Mueller was his beloved cousin.

Bobby was at his trailer, the ten year old boy's eyes were red from crying; he had composed himself and now faced Footloose. "Dad and Mom were away when the time storm came, I understand they aren't coming back."

He hugged Bobby. "Uncle Footloose, are we in .'The Last Days'? I read the book of .'Revelations'. after I got through crying. Is the .'Beast'. coming?"

"No, Bobby; its a time thing and it's not the Devil." He checked Bobby's surroundings. Enough, food, water,and hygiene items for a month. "Daddy taught me shooting and first aid, I'll be ok." "I'll check on him twice daily." Pastor Kilroy."

"Bobby." Footloose began. "If you get scared, you head to Fort Wadsworth. You know where that is." Bobby hugged him. "I'll be good." "Take care". Footloose left the park.

Von Blitzkrieg
07-09-2009, 08:26 PM
Los Angeles, California. C.H.I.P.s patrolman Robert Miller held his 1928A1 Thompson, his .38 special revolver had been augumented by his personal .45 automatic 1911A1. Heaven knew, he'd very soon all three guns; Japanese landing craft were approaching the beaches.

The civilians, National Guard, and police; they would conduct a fighting retreat towards the valley and then the desert. In the desert, they'd link up with the army and make a stand.

Robert's neighbor, Todd Foreman; the kid had showed up with his Remington 81 semiautomatic
.35 hunting rifle and that made him lucky, too. Most of the defenders on the beach below, they only had manually-operated Winchester or Springfield rifles.

Six water-cooled .30 machineguns, they were the only automatic weapons the defenders had, apart from privately toted handguns. The defenders opened up on the Japanese, as they waded through the water; hundreds of Japnese dead soon filled the surf but enough made it ashore. Their automatic weapons fire began mangling the defenders.

A riot gun-toting cop yelled. "They've got submachineguns!" The riflemen below were either slaughtered, or else they fled inland. The machinegunners kept firing until their ammunition was exhausted. They drew .45s and either shot their way out or died trying.

The L.A. police chief ordered. "Donot fire until they crest the hill facing our position." That was almost instantaneously afterwards.

Todd shot a katana-wielding officer, the soft nosed bullet demolishing the area between his belt buckle and chest. He was slain, as the cops and civilians opened up on the rampaging Japs.

Semi hunting rifles, tommyguns, BARs, and Johnson light machineguns; the tornadic rate of fire butchered the attackers and there was a lull in the action.

Robert found he'd burned three magazines of tommygun ammo up, Todd was reloading his Remington 81; too and the both of them got their ammo refilled. The next attack would soon come.

cliff secord
07-10-2009, 07:13 AM
"President Palin"...Aw, HELL NO!

Von Blitzkrieg
07-10-2009, 11:40 AM
Los Angeles, a city park. Hundreds of horsemen and women were gather amidst a tree clearing; they were all armed and Bridget
Osborne expertly held the reins of her mare. The Texas Ranger had been rushed in to coordinate resistance against the Japanese.
Said Ranger was mounted atop a Tennessee Walker.

Todd Foreman was Bridget's love, she vowed to save him; Bridget was a hunter, a good shot, and an expert horsewoman, she intently watched the Ranger.

"I've been a Ranger since 1915, I was a deputy sheiff for years prior that. I've fought Mexicans, outlaws, rustlers, gangsters." Bridget noticed the Ranger had a Remington rifle like Todd's, he has twin .45 automatics; one on each hip.

"But I've never fought Tanks and airplanes, however; our duty is reconnaissance, rescuing downed personnel and hit-and-run raids on the Japanese." Bridget herself was armed with twin Colt New Service revolvers, her rifle was an 1892 Winchester; and her guns were all .44-40 caliber.

One man said that he willing to die for America. The Ranger's icy brown eyes stared at him. "Are you willing to kill for America, son? Nobody ever wins by dying, you win by killing the foe first."

"We won't take prisoners, because the Jap radio says any civilian resisting their army will be executed. Time for us to teach Hirohito a lesson."

Every horse rider had either a lever action rifle, or else; a semiautomatic rifle and all the handguns prsent were either doublec revolvers or 1911s.

A police motorcyclist roared up, its cop dismounted and he handed the ranger a message. "We are to heard towards the board walk area of the beach, and aid the defenders in retreating. Be alert for Jap planes and tanks." The motocyclist roared off.

"Rangers, mount up!" They all trotted their horses towards the fighting. Soon, the air was filled the sounds of gunfire.

Robert Miller and Todd Foreman, along with multiple defenders; a nambu machinegun crew blocked their retreat. Todd shot four more Japanese, while Robert reloaded his tommy gun.

The machinegun crew was was a detachment of Japan's elite Seaman Guards, they were excellent bayonet users; they stuck to their Arisakas and largely disdained automatic weaponry.

The Ranger halted his horse riders, He observed. "That machinegun's pointed the wrong way, Trot up to them, then rush them shooting!"

Bridget obeyed, Halfway there; the Ranger emptied his rifle into the machinegun crew, slaughtering them first. The Seaman Guards screamed, "BANZAI!"
and did a bayonet charge.

Everybody present emptied revolvers or semiautomatic pistols, the banzai chargers died,
as worthlessly as they had lived; they were cut down by the tornadic fire rate of two hundred modern handguns. Everybody reloaded, the captured machinegun and its ammunition were to the beleaguered cops.

Robert Miller rode a National Guard Jeep out, Todd Foreman rode double saddle with Bridget Osborne.
"Lucky boy, he'll soon have a wife." The radio crackled.

"All police, civilian defenders, and National Guard, you are to head towards the California desert and link up with the army there. Be alert for Jap tanks and Jap planes."

They moved by horse and vehicle towards their destination.

Von Blitzkrieg
07-12-2009, 06:50 PM
The Pitt... The Joes had reassembled, some with their families; Colonel Sharp assembled them. "We've been time-warped to WWII,
all of you; both adults and kids, you can help."

Six veterinarians, 4 meteorologists, 10 radio operators, five doctors, eight gunsmiths; virtually everybody present had a skill
that could help the Allied war effort.

The next day, Colonel Sharp was astonished to hear
the sounds of AK47s from the weapons range. The gunsmiths were already mass-producing an improved AK47.

A gunsmith told him. "Col. Sharp, here's our improved AK47." Sharp examined said AK47. "Hey, the sights line up instantly; and without adjustment, too!"

"It's our copy of the .'Krebs Ghost Ring Sight'; we changed the stock's design and the rifle is essentially an AKM with modified stock and sights."

The gunsmith explained further. "We put a Galil handguard, with an internal steel heat shield; too and we painted the front sight neon pink. The only problem is that it is semiautomatic only." He paused.
"If you give every other man a submachinegun, that will fix it. Hans, show them the Sumoi."

Hans Dressler showed Col. Sharp the Suomi. "The only improvements are a Galil-style grooved handguard, along with a fixed peep sight." "How soon can we start producing them?" Col Sharp. inquired.

Magda, Hans' wife replied. "We have a truck filled with fifty AK47s and fifty Suomis, each; tac gear and loaded magazines are ready on your go, too.
All have been test fired."

The radio on Colonel Sharp's hip. crackled. It was the front gate. Moments later, General George S. Patton entered said gate; he lead a column of U.S. M3 tanks.

Colonel Sharp and General Patton both exchanged
salutes. "Let's get down to business, Colonel; I believe this time travel story of yours. Your equipment is simply too advanced for any other rational explanation."

"We have a shipment of AK47s ready to go, General; just tell us where to send it and it will be done, sir."

General Patton replied. "We need those weapons go to Springfield Armory, Colonel." "Herr General, that may not be necessary." Hans Dressler said.

"We have boxes of technical manuals and equipment ready to began production of the AK47 rifle and Suomi submachinegun. We need only one crate of each weapon for these purposes. Ammunition, magazines, and tactical gear would do likewise."

"Splendid! But what are Germans doing aiding Americans now?" "Herr General, we are from the Republic of Germany; not Nazi Germany. We help you to stop Hitler from destroying our nation."

Dr. Albert Einstein soon arrived, escorted by FBI agents. A briefing was prepared in the Command Center. "Apparently, some things of your time were also hurled back with you. That would explain the atomic raids on Japan."

"Yes." Grunt replied. "I've tracked a wireless internet signal to this location." SAid position was pin pointed upon a map. A senior FBI official checked it against a map. "That is about 5 miles east of here."

In his trailer, Epstein Morales smiled. He was a rabid supported to 21st Century Reconquista movement. If the Japanese and Anglos destroyed each other, La Raza could reconquer the American Southwest for Mexico.
Morales thought himself a Hispanic first and foremost.

Others of his mindset scorned learning, Morales embraced it. 'Learn the Anglo, to better destroy the Anglo'. was his mindset." Morales had been
a computer whiz whom worked from his home as a videogame designer. But he used his career to fund the National Council of La Raza.

Suddenly, multiple vehicles stopped outside his trailer. FBI agents and Third Armored Divison soldiers surrounded it. M1s, Thompsons, BARS were pointed at it

Morales snatched up a Glock 19 with a 33 round magazine, determined to kll as many Anglos as possible. He flung open the door. The muzzle of an M2 Tank's 37mm cannon stared at him. An FBI man slugged him over the head with a Thompson's butt and all was blackness....

Von Blitzkrieg
07-23-2009, 02:13 PM
Germany... "Ah, Japan has bought us the time we needed." smiled General Panzer von Blitzkrieg; he met with the German High Command." "Our war goals must be to smash through in North Africa, link up with the Japanese in China or Indiana; all the while using our COBRA allies to contain the Soviet Union."

Destro smiled. "Yes, COBRA will help you in this way." Erwin Rommel was stunned, he had been already promoted to Field Marshal. Hitler had been arrested and taken to protective custody.
The German High Command and Destro essentially were Germany's new leaders.

Russia... The Germans stared, as the fleets of trucks lined them up to return them to Germany; COBRA motorized infantry and HISS tanks replaced them. All the COBRA Infantry and HISS Tanks moved into positions.

In the distance... "For the Bolshevik party, for Mother Russia, ATTACK!" yelled a commissar. "URRAH!" yelled three million Soviet soldiers. Waves of T34 tanks joined them, as Il-2 Sturmovik attack planes roared in for the kill.

One hundred thousand COBRA infantrymen, AK47s and light machineguns ready began firing from concrete fortifications. Russian bayonet chargers started falling at an alarming rate.

Sgt. Mikhail Kalashnikov rolled his T34 tank towards the approaching HISS Tanks. BOOMM! BLANNNGGG! The T34's 76mm shell failed to penetrate a HISS tank's armor. Said tank swiveled its turret their way. BOOM, BOOM! twin 115mm cannon roared. WHAMMM! Sgt. Kalashnikov was blown from the tank, badly hurt; nothing remained of his tank and its crew but a funeal pyre of wreckage. Kalashnikov crawled to safety.

"Wild Weasel to To Rattler Squadron, Dive on Soviet planes now!" The Rattlers peeled off, and began dog fighting the Sturmoviks.