Bob the Custom Fodder Trooper Prologue

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

Alright, here's the first sequence. There are a total of 6 or so parts to the prologue, and they will be added VERY SOON!

Please leave feedback, good or bad (don't be too harsh, I bruise!) I can only get better if I know what does and doesn't work. And please don't mind the crappy camera.

UPDATED: Added segment 2
UPDATED: Added segment 3

[Monkeywrench]

very cool. I liked the blank stare CC gave the trooper before he said get out.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

very cool. I liked the blank stare CC gave the trooper before he said get out.

Thanks for the good words, Monkeywrench.

Added Segment 2

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

PLEASE PEOPLE; if you read the stuff, at least give me your opinion. If it's good or bad, I would really like to know how people are liking what I'm working on.

[Tracker]

i like it. It's clever an a good laugh

[Captain Carstein]

Great stuff man. Keep up the good work.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

i like it. It's clever an a good laugh

Great stuff man. Keep up the good work.

Thanks very much for the feedback. I just want to know if it's alright- I have finals and all, but this is something I want to do. I just want to know it's enough to make people chuckle.

And if you don't like it or have a suggestion, by all means, I'm listening!

[Troynos]

It's pretty good. I laughed.

[Money-B]

Really cool man.

The dialogue was funny and it was much easier to read this time.

Nice work.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

Really cool man.

The dialogue was funny and it was much easier to read this time.

Nice work.

Thanks man. i took your suggestion about the dog whisperer thing and the text. I hope you like one of the upcoming segments, it deals with his specialty!

[wardamnpjm]

FUNNY!!! Good job!

[Hicks_Royel]

Pretty good stuff, could've stopped before the last six panels without really losing any of the humor though.

Destro breaking down the situation with the DVD sets was pretty good. I could almost hear it in that voice of his.

[COL Abernathy]

I had a good laugh and it looks like you had great fun. Don't worry so much about what other people think - the more fun you have with it, the more likely people will enjoy it too!

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

Pretty good stuff, could've stopped before the last six panels without really losing any of the humor though.

Destro breaking down the situation with the DVD sets was pretty good. I could almost hear it in that voice of his.

Thanks for the input. Looking back, I can see your point.

I had a good laugh and it looks like you had great fun. Don't worry so much about what other people think - the more fun you have with it, the more likely people will enjoy it too!

Thanks for the kind words. The only reason why I'm asking for opinions is because this is my first fan dio story thing, and I want it to be as good as it can, and I appreciate the input of people on the site. When the first saga is complete, I'm hoping to make it into a pdf file and make it available to download to anyone interested, but I'm hoping to make the file as good as can be!

And yeah, it was a whole lot of fun, but putting all the toys back into place in their displays in my apt is a pain! Still, it was fun!

[Hicks_Royel]

Yeah, I assume you'll be continuing this into a series. Which is great, we collect these things and should do something with them.

I just figure the Viper encounter might've been better at the start of the next strip.

I do like the Norm MacDonald attitude Bob seems to have about his world.

[harkiri]

nice job, hilarious

[Venomfang]

The ideas Bob had were hilarious and the blank stare Bob got for them was funny as hell, the end panel was gold xD

[nighthawk]

Keep it up. It's funny stuff. I got a good laugh out of it.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

Added the armory part of the Prologue. Enjoy!

[daremo]

Ha! Priceless, I love the mockery of all things Cobra. Seriously funny. I do hope you continue this series.

[twatson4_95]

Funny, funny. I'd like to see more!

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

Thanks! I'll probably get prologue part II up soon, and then I'll have to put up a link with all of the stuff so far, so I don't run out of attachments.