Bob the Custom Fodder Trooper is coming... (language)

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

The Chronicles of Bob is soon to be nigh... Beware my boredom!!!

The Chronicles of Bob, featuring the touching story of a random cobra trooper used for custom fodder, and how he tries to come to grips with it. He is joined by the three ghosts of custom bodies, The Ghost of Too Many Customs, the Ghost of Too Few Customs, and the Ghost of No Customs. And if Bob is to get on his feet, he must find the Two Wise Toys, and discover if he is... The Chosen Custom!!!! Plus, he might score with that totally hot red chick. And that'd be cool, right?

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

BTW, the fuzziness in the first couple of pics was intentional, to give it a fake "flair", but the last pic was a total accident. I'll replace it soon, with a better one. This wasn't meant to be good mind you, as much as entertaining. Hope you have a laugh.

[MLos1]

You should make him a "Dog Whisperer." That's his Cobra Military Spec. So he can fight off Timber and Junkyard. But that's about all he's good for.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

You should make him a "Dog Whisperer." That's his Cobra Military Spec.

lol. that would actually work with something I had planned. thanks for the suggestion.

[Money-B]

I got a good laugh from it.
I just wish it had been a little easier to read though.

[Snake Eyes-Joe Ninja]

I got a good laugh from it.
I just wish it had been a little easier to read though.

Sorry about that, this is my first attempt. I'm going to increase the font and bold it when I start the series proper, so thanks for your input, it really helped! I didn't have a problem reading it, but I wrote it, so it doesn't count. I'll definitely take that into consideration.

[Money-B]

No problem. I didn't mean to sound critical.
It's very good for a first effort and I can't wait to see more.