Ghosts: Episode 12 is up!

[General Hawk]

Mostly just dialogue, but it's leading up to Darkness Falls, which is going to be HUGE. It's going to be so huge I have no idea when I'm going to have time to produce it. 8-O

But, anyway... Episode 12 is up (http://www.generalsjoes.com/dioramas/ghosts/ghoststwelve-1.htm), and an Epilogue will be coming soon.

Justin

[Captain STEVEN DePACE]

Nice chapter, however I have to give you a little bit of grief with the framing of some of your shots. On page 2 picture 2 you can see beyond the MCC, it looks really strange because you can't say the MCC is open since it's brightly lit yet the outside looks like it's night so it really doesn't work, also there's a few other shots with outside sections of the MCC which while providing contrast to all the bright tan make the whole thing seem a little off.

I understand that the MCC is a really difficult vehicle to operate with but different angles and cropping would help make it look a lot better

[General Hawk]

Actually the MCC has been identified as being inside and underground hanger in the Utah desert, the external surrounding areas are merely sections of that hanger. The MCC is definitely supposed to be open.

Thanks for the comments! :)

Justin