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IIIzoeIII
10-16-2011, 04:25 PM
hey erbody
this is just a small sample from the motion comic I've been working on..it's kind of a Halloween themed comic
my take on horror...though not much horror is present in this clip
so perhaps I should set it up...

this guy transforms into a winged gothic angel thing who feeds on human blood...ikr lol
this scene is the morning after one of his late night outings.
If I do a joe comic it will be something like this

feel free to leave feedback good or bad all comments/criticism is welcome

scene 3 - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nzf6fmdDY20)
Derek
10-16-2011, 10:03 PM
Not bad, can you put more motion in the character? All I have seen in motion comics is Iron man and X-men that's on netflix.
spot138
10-16-2011, 10:37 PM
Looks great, You've got a lot of tallent!
All the motion comics I've seen have just kind of guided the viewer through the pannels, and occasionaly have some cool transition effects. The memory flashback in yours is definetly a cut above.
You should continue to develop this.
IIIzoeIII
10-17-2011, 03:31 PM
Not bad, can you put more motion in the character? All I have seen in motion comics is Iron man and X-men that's on netflix.

yeah those are pretty neat almost fully animated...and yes I can and have in other scenes..Joe would prolly tax me quite a bit do to the animation aspect of it...like anytime someone fired a gun or did some ninja shit lol

Looks great, You've got a lot of tallent!
All the motion comics I've seen have just kind of guided the viewer through the pannels, and occasionaly have some cool transition effects. The memory flashback in yours is definetly a cut above.
You should continue to develop this.

thanks,I have 6 scenes of this comic done so far not counting the 2 scenes that come before the opening credit sequence. I do more cinematic things in them.I think the animation helps me set the pace better than just stills throughout.
I am kind of new to this whole process though..but I'm learning :)
seyms
10-17-2011, 03:37 PM
Wow, your work is really good! The artwork is impressive.
IIIzoeIII
10-17-2011, 05:26 PM
Wow, your work is really good! The artwork is impressive.

thank you
G.I. JOSEPH
10-17-2011, 06:27 PM
the flashbacks were really cool. dug the color contrast.
IIIzoeIII
10-20-2011, 11:05 PM
the flashbacks were really cool. dug the color contrast.

thanks :)