Viper6
08-06-2008, 01:00 AM
so would any of you be interested in short bits of fan fiction ive thrown together or may pen in the future? and is here the place the post it? curiously i havent seen other on here?
excerpt
Above the roar of deisel engines that pushed thick clouds of smoke across the muddy battlefield, in which the fatigued soldiers of the 001st mechanized infantry trudged on, the commander cursed his men from the open turret of his immobilized tank. while others struggled forward straining to conquer the massive culverts of mud and stone, others were disabled and falling behind the advance. with one arm resting on the massive twin cannons, elevated forward right, he shook his other gloved fist at his troops. His mirrored faceplate shadowed by a large striped helmet reflected the frustration of his men, who worked tirelessly beneath him to repair the track. The commander leaned over and surveyed the situation in disgust. heaving himself back in the turret he turned his head skyward to the orange hued horizon streaked with the jetwash of his Rattler squadron. Despite the comfort of their overwatch the commander was consumed with the of delay of his genius plan and he screeched out in raspy rage "why are you all so fucking incompetent? unghhhh-ahhhhhhh!" the sound of metal on metal was punctuated with cursing and grumbling as one trooper spilled the tool box into the mud, shaken by his commanders discontent. sweat broke out across his brow as his eyes widened to meet the mirrored slate of the tyrant seated above. he choked on his excuse as his breath came quick, staring into his reflection he saw the fear that cobra commander surely witnessed and his pulse raced. his black halfmask did nothing to disguise his youth and inexperience and his blue kevlar sat entirely too large on his head, but still he was a cobra soldier...he'd hoped that service would count for something "you fool!" the commander accused him as he in an instant produced a weapon and leveled it to the troopers head. the others dispersed as the report echoed and the youngman slumped into the mud. the commanders boots sank in the mud as he lept from the HISS smoke still trailing from the barrel of his sidearm. he kicked the corpse and cursed it. He turned a circle spewing threats and orders as his men diligently returned to work. holstering his blaster he poduced a comlink with the other hand and with a familiar bleep, alerted his mercenery sub commander. "Major Bludd, this is Cobra Commander, do you copy?"
"Aye commander loud and clear you are" came the reply in an accent the commander found excrutiating.
"Good" cobra commander continued "I'm assuming command of your HISS, proceed to my location at once!" Cobra commander flipped his comlink shut and slid it into one of several pockets on his dark blue fatigues. He folded his arms and surveyed the terrain ahead as his men made their way forward, he wondered when the GI JOE team would attempt to interdict his advance, he wondered if his sabotuer FIREFLY had succeeded at his mission. The commander smiled as the familiar turning of tread approached on his six, and the Major ordered his driver to halt.
interested in more? thoughts?
excerpt
Above the roar of deisel engines that pushed thick clouds of smoke across the muddy battlefield, in which the fatigued soldiers of the 001st mechanized infantry trudged on, the commander cursed his men from the open turret of his immobilized tank. while others struggled forward straining to conquer the massive culverts of mud and stone, others were disabled and falling behind the advance. with one arm resting on the massive twin cannons, elevated forward right, he shook his other gloved fist at his troops. His mirrored faceplate shadowed by a large striped helmet reflected the frustration of his men, who worked tirelessly beneath him to repair the track. The commander leaned over and surveyed the situation in disgust. heaving himself back in the turret he turned his head skyward to the orange hued horizon streaked with the jetwash of his Rattler squadron. Despite the comfort of their overwatch the commander was consumed with the of delay of his genius plan and he screeched out in raspy rage "why are you all so fucking incompetent? unghhhh-ahhhhhhh!" the sound of metal on metal was punctuated with cursing and grumbling as one trooper spilled the tool box into the mud, shaken by his commanders discontent. sweat broke out across his brow as his eyes widened to meet the mirrored slate of the tyrant seated above. he choked on his excuse as his breath came quick, staring into his reflection he saw the fear that cobra commander surely witnessed and his pulse raced. his black halfmask did nothing to disguise his youth and inexperience and his blue kevlar sat entirely too large on his head, but still he was a cobra soldier...he'd hoped that service would count for something "you fool!" the commander accused him as he in an instant produced a weapon and leveled it to the troopers head. the others dispersed as the report echoed and the youngman slumped into the mud. the commanders boots sank in the mud as he lept from the HISS smoke still trailing from the barrel of his sidearm. he kicked the corpse and cursed it. He turned a circle spewing threats and orders as his men diligently returned to work. holstering his blaster he poduced a comlink with the other hand and with a familiar bleep, alerted his mercenery sub commander. "Major Bludd, this is Cobra Commander, do you copy?"
"Aye commander loud and clear you are" came the reply in an accent the commander found excrutiating.
"Good" cobra commander continued "I'm assuming command of your HISS, proceed to my location at once!" Cobra commander flipped his comlink shut and slid it into one of several pockets on his dark blue fatigues. He folded his arms and surveyed the terrain ahead as his men made their way forward, he wondered when the GI JOE team would attempt to interdict his advance, he wondered if his sabotuer FIREFLY had succeeded at his mission. The commander smiled as the familiar turning of tread approached on his six, and the Major ordered his driver to halt.
interested in more? thoughts?