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ciasteczko
05-25-2011, 02:20 PM
I've never really posted my drawings online before... mostly because I'm not too confident in my colouring abilities. But you don't get better unless you put yourself out there, I guess.

Let me know what you think.

Mermaniel
05-25-2011, 02:24 PM
Looks good man! She kinda looks sleezy and a little drunk. Just how I like my women! ROLF!

Nictus
05-25-2011, 02:25 PM
i'd bang her on my wall

HANG i'd HANG her on my wall...and bang her

MLos1
05-25-2011, 02:34 PM
i love it...she looks hottttt!!!!

great body!

her pixie cut always did it for me, too.

Gundamben831
05-25-2011, 02:44 PM
very nice, you did a good job

JR0d28
05-25-2011, 08:05 PM
nice artwork

joe1974
05-25-2011, 09:25 PM
i'd bang her on my wall

hang i'd hang her on my wall...and bang her

lol!!!

Griff
05-25-2011, 09:50 PM
i'd bang her on my wall

HANG i'd HANG her on my wall...and bang her

dude you gotta stop watching hostel and hostel 2 ha ha. I will say that drawing is very.....inspiring.

sbartek1974
05-25-2011, 10:00 PM
dude you gotta stop watching hostel and hostel 2 ha ha. I will say that drawing is very.....inspiring.

Inspiring and uh...uplifting. he, he, he.

sjames90
05-25-2011, 10:19 PM
Very nice artwork.

IIIzoeIII
05-25-2011, 11:04 PM
looks pretty good
you should post more of your stuff and get it circulating

Wry1
05-26-2011, 12:40 AM
right on man, the lines around the bellybutton look kinda off, but all in all pretty solid work for sure. and yeah, would love to see more of your art.

Shipwreck
05-26-2011, 12:46 AM
Well... Wry1 likes it.. He's the best there is at art that I've ever known to call a pal. But I like your color and art stance, I do agree the lines seems a bit off, but overall, captured the gravity pretty well. Keep it up, show off more, I am sure we`ll comment on more.

in the mean time, Looks real good!

ciasteczko
05-26-2011, 09:03 AM
Inspiring and uh...uplifting. he, he, he.

Lmaooo, all these horndog replies made my day.

right on man, the lines around the bellybutton look kinda off, but all in all pretty solid work for sure. and yeah, would love to see more of your art.

Thanks for the crit, Wry1 and Shipwreck! I really appreciate it.

And thanks, everybody, for all the nice replies. I'll be sure to post more of my stuff for you soon. If anybody has any requests or anything, feel free to message me. :)

Shin Densetsu
05-27-2011, 03:30 AM
Looks good so far, it reads well, I would kill off the lines on her abs though, and just draw something that suggests the bellybutton in lieu of drawing the whole thing. same premise with drawing teeth, not always best to draw each individual tooth unless your drawing a zombie or something.

I need to look at it more, but something might be off with the boobs. Have you taken figure drawing classes, or have an anatomy book on you?

Sgt Humpty
05-27-2011, 03:41 AM
Wow, I think she looks great! Nice job!

redx24
05-27-2011, 04:01 AM
i love it 4 million times better than the stick figures i draw

ciasteczko
05-28-2011, 04:46 PM
Looks good so far, it reads well, I would kill off the lines on her abs though, and just draw something that suggests the bellybutton in lieu of drawing the whole thing. same premise with drawing teeth, not always best to draw each individual tooth unless your drawing a zombie or something.

I need to look at it more, but something might be off with the boobs. Have you taken figure drawing classes, or have an anatomy book on you?

Thanks for the crit, I really do appreciate it.

Yeah, looking back, I'll probably omit doing ab lines next time I draw a female with her belly exposed. I personally like seeing tough chicks that have some muscle, but it really does look a little strange here, doesn't it?

As for her boobs, I think there's definitely a problem with the way the jacket sits on them. I'm really not too good with clothes. The boobs themselves are pretty much in the right place, though - I'm a girl, I checked it myself, lmao.

I've never taken an art class, but I probably should. I don't have any anatomy books on me, either, but I do have a few of Andrew Loomis' soon-to-be republished books on preorder. Hopefully I'll improve when I study them.

Shin Densetsu
05-30-2011, 11:55 AM
Thanks for the crit, I really do appreciate it.

Yeah, looking back, I'll probably omit doing ab lines next time I draw a female with her belly exposed. I personally like seeing tough chicks that have some muscle, but it really does look a little strange here, doesn't it?

As for her boobs, I think there's definitely a problem with the way the jacket sits on them. I'm really not too good with clothes. The boobs themselves are pretty much in the right place, though - I'm a girl, I checked it myself, lmao.

I've never taken an art class, but I probably should. I don't have any anatomy books on me, either, but I do have a few of Andrew Loomis' soon-to-be republished books on preorder. Hopefully I'll improve when I study them.

Wait WHAAAATTTT? Soon to be republished? Preorder? When? How much? Link me!

ciasteczko
05-30-2011, 05:07 PM
Wait WHAAAATTTT? Soon to be republished? Preorder? When? How much? Link me!

Figure Drawing for All It's Worth (http://www.amazon.com/Figure-Drawing-All-Its-Worth/dp/0857680986), available on May 31st (tomorrow! :)).

Drawing the Head and Hands (http://www.amazon.com/Drawing-Head-Hands-Andrew-Loomis/dp/0857680978/), available on October 4th.

I think I'll post this info up in the artist resource thread, too.

Ako Roshi
05-30-2011, 06:34 PM
looks pretty good
you should post more of your stuff and get it circulating

Couldn't agree more. You seem to have a good foundation and with more eyes looking at your work, it can only help you improve.

Let's see more!

GlasgowSmiles
06-13-2011, 03:30 AM
I thought the boobs themselves looked good and natural, and clearly they've gotten a... warm response.

I like girls having ab lines, or at least a little soft, subtle shading. Lady Joes do need some muscle definition, they kick serious booty.

And yes, moar art please. (I'm not gonna lie, though, I'm thinking less about sexy ladies and more about... not sexy ladies. Or sexy not-ladies, to be more apt...)

KINKO
06-13-2011, 03:40 AM
You are a Excellent Artist my Friend . . . Killer Bod !!!!!!!!